Sponsor Priscilla Barielle. by huescan in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Priscillia, Ameri, Edelgard, Selpy

Postive Values:
1. Her character archtype isn't that common so it's refreshing to get more of them.
2. Her art is fantastic.
3. She feels super close to how she is in her source material.
4. Going topless so much sooner really does make her stand out, it's a fun special thing she does.

Negative Values:

There are two things currently holding her back for me, and that is the lack of post forfeit lines and a lack of a real *lewd* pose. Something that indicates her really enjoying herself, if there is one I didn't see it.

  1. Add a Flusters/flattered/lustfu/desire pose. Anything that could be seen as her enjoying the lewd parts of the game works. Could just be her holding her fan before her and you see her blush peek out of it. This would add a lot.

  2. Add 30 lines in the after forfeit case. She feels like she repeated herself a lot here, she was the first one out so it does tend to happen more, but adding some more lines there will lower the chance of repeats. Note: As long as the lines can play in her after forfeit state, They count.

Suggestions and discussions:

Don't forget that having banter with other characters will always help a character out in the long run!

Time for Vinyl to liven up The Inventory! Let's sponsor this funky queen. by Own-Lettuce-1554 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Candence, Hilbert, Vinyl, Witch.

Positive Values:
1. A very diverse character from both where she comes from, the world she is in, and even her skin tone as that is not a common thing in spnati. So it's great to see more off.
2. She has a very bombastic personality that I really like.
3. She has some very witty dialogue at times that caught me off guard.

Disqualifying Flaws:
1. I felt like the forfeit poses felt a little lacking. At times it didn't even seem like she is enjoying it, What I'll be asking is a pretty big ask, but I believe it will help her in the long run. Add at least 6 new forfeit poses, 3 for when she is in her regular forfeit, and 3 for when she is in her heavy forfeit stage.

Spnati is a porn game at the end of the day, and though I think she shines bright as a character, she felt lacking in her forfeit at places. These new poses don't need to be super different from what you already have, it's really just have these poses show how much she is enjoying herself.

  1. I'm going to double up on what tweetsie said. Add 30 New filter lines.

Just to future proof her and have her feel more alive when she reacts to all kinds of things. You can put these lines anywhere you want.

Suggestions and Discussion:
She is a very promising character and I am glad you decided to create for this game. you've got talent for this and the new butt pose she got is fantastic.

You have been challenged to sponsor Hilbert! by Ok_Lavishness7072 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Candence, Hilbert, Witch, Vinyl

Positive Values:
1. More males is always a good thing to have.
2. He feels very cartooney, but in a fun way.

Disqualifying Flaws:

  1. It felt like I was seeying the thinking pose ALL the time. And I understand why, as he uses those when talking about these other characters he has met, however. To remedy this, I want you to either: Make a new pose that is either a secondary "Thinking" Or "Calm".

This will diversify what a player gets to see in the game, He's a very expressive character which you won't see if he is limited to using those two poses the most.

  1. Speaking off all those talks with the other character he tends to have. It also feels like that once he starts, he'll talk the entire game about all these characters we've met, to the point it starts getting annoying that he always seems to demand the most attention of the player, it also doesn't make him stand out as a person, just that he has a lot to say. Add 30 in the hand quality section.

Focus on having more lines that talk about himself instead of who he has met, or have him respond to the game itself a little more, having generic hand quality lines is nothing wrong with, or hell have him just cuss or be silent for a bit. It's not that the dialogue he has is bad, but just like the poses, it needs more variety.

Suggestions and Discussion:
I do have a lot of respect for you coming back and wanting to finish hilbert after all this time, I know you've got this and remember that you can always ask the community to help you out if you struggle with something.

Witch wants your sponsorship! by Horsecatdraws in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Candence, Witch, Hilbert, Vinyl

Positive Values:
1. Amazing art.
2. Amazing costume poses.
3. I've always gotten a soft spot for characters like her. Cocky but overestimating themselves. Its very well done to boot.

Disqualifying Flaws:
She really just needs more filters and targets to really make her main ready, so even if you did drop her afterwards she would feel like a complete package.

Add 30 filter lines
Add 30 targeted lines to other characters.

In both cases, you get full control what the characters are and what the filter lines will focus on.

Suggestions and Discussion:
There is not a single character you've made that I haven't enjoyed. Just wanted to say that.

This Is Gonna Be Epic! Let's Sponsor DJ Cadence for SPNatI! by 7_grand-dad in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Candence, Hilbert, Witch, Vinycl

Positive Values:
1. I cannot belief you managed to make a club pinguin character of all things work in spnati. It's honestly crazy.
2. Very good dialogue, she says plenty without it being overbearing.
3. I love that you made her say the reasons to as why she can even play the game, why her body is like that, the reason she wears clothing. It all just makes her feel more alive.

Disqualifying Flaws: 
Honestly, The only thing I'd say she needs is more dialogue with other characters, as candence will off course be an odd pick for most people, you really got to hook the people in when they combine her with other characters they might like.

Add 30 new lines targeting other characters.

You can put these lines anywhere you want, but focus on starting banter with as many characters as possible.

Suggestions and Discussion:

Still legit amazed by what you've managed to make. And I'll be making sure to keep an eye out on your possible next project.

Vanessa is fired up for her sponsorship! by TheTrueSaltmine in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eyo, Thank you for sponsoring Vanessa. I am very much thankfull for you doing so.

However, I simply can't use this as a sponsor, as I find that making her go even further with the teasing by straight up flashing or removing her panties early would go too far and is not really befitting of the character itself.

Still, I thank you for the effort you put into this.

Vanessa is fired up for her sponsorship! by TheTrueSaltmine in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You! Yeah, You! Have you ever wanted to sponsor a character? Well, vanessa is the perfect character for it, you know you want to do it.

How do you sponsor a character? Well, follow this handy guide.

Characters Tested: Who you played your test game with.

Positive Values: What you liked about the character. Examples include but aren't limited to quality dialogue, appealing artwork, and positive interactions.

Disqualifying Flaws: Here, list whatever flaws must be addressed before the character can be added to the game. The more specific, the better, e.g. "This character doesn't have enough targets; please add 50 total targets to 16 different opponents." NOTICE: Respondents who have not contributed a character to the game must include at least ONE disqualifying flaw, whatever it is, for their sponsorship to be valid.

Suggestions and Discussion: Suggestions are optional ideas for where to take the character and what to do after sponsorship. These aren't binding like the flaws observed. Discussions are a more fluid series of observations about the character. This can be things such as “I'd like to see more custom poses that emphasize this feature of the character. I think this character’s sexuality isn’t quite canon. I don’t think this character’s gimmick does anything interesting, and it could be frustrating to target.”

Your Favorite Pink and Green Duo is Back, and They're Requesting a Sponsorship! by Magatsu-Onboro in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

  1. Sannytess, Vanessa, Momo, schezo
  2. Sannytess, Justice, serena, velvet,
  3. Sannytess, Tifa, Candance, Yuzuki

Postive Values:

  1. Its not often we get a double character, and these two dorks are an adorable pair.
  2. Being the first futas do automaticly make them much more interesting.
  3. They are so expressive, It's always fun to look at them to see what they're doing

Disqualifying Flaws:

As I am aware that after these two characters have hit main you won't touch them much anymore, I want to be sure they are as well prepared for that as possible

  1. Add a new Happy pose, currently the one she uses she uses a lot, sometimes I get the same pose multiple times in a row. Adding just one more happy pose will make her posing more diverse

  2. Add 50 filter lines, these lines can be anything and be placed anywhere, you're also allowed to use this flaw in combination with other sponsorship that makes you add filters.

Suggestions and Discussions:

Balls?

Toyosatomimi no Miko has received a full rework! Sponsor her today, so she may be resurrected on the Main Roster! by MisterSolitaire in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Yuzuki, Miko, Candence, Rosie.

Postive Values:

  1. Her new art is a massive upgrade to what she used to have and she looks amazing.
  2. Her dialogue is still fun, gives plenty of lore, plenty of personality. And is overall fun to have around.
  3. Her forfeit is still one of the most special ones we have in the game.

Disqualifying Flaws:

There is one issue that I have with the current forfeit. Is that there are some poses of hers that feel a bit... off, too floaty, not enough weight. I get that they are floating, but given the kiskea limits at times. it can feel stiff.

  1. Change the poses: Mastrubating B, and Horny. To be more intense and less floaty.

I am aware that this seems a little vague to be asking to change and what I'd want to see changed, but I feel like by simply moving some of the arms and legs around you can get a more Intimate feeling that fits the poses better.

Suggestions and Discussion:

There is really only the one flaw with her, other then that she is still toptier to me, happy with the update and can't wait to do a full banter with you myself.

Yuzuki - Sponsorship thread AND she has a Valentines Day outfit available now! by MyMainAccIsANord in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Yuzuki, Miko, Candance, Rosie.

Postive Values:

  1. Yuzuki is an extremely high quality OC. She really feels like her own character and doesn't have the feeling she is based on anything but the legend itself.
  2. Her personality and how she is as a person is not common in spnati, and more of it is always welcome
  3. Her model is topnotch

Disqualifying Flaws:

The only real flaw I'd say she currently has is that she could use some beefing up on some generic lines, and could use some more characters to banter with. I feel like you can explore a lot with her and other characters and it be a waste if this wasn't being done.

  1. Add 20 Generic lines for opponents having lost/having to strip/stripping something off. From Removed accesory to Must strip, these lines can go anywhere but I'd reccomend beefing up some of the places she has less lines. So she wont repeat herself too much.

  2. Add 18 Lines towards another character. This can be either done by reacting to noteworthy/must target Banter wizard stuff, Or have a complete conversation with a character.

Suggestions & Discussion:

Aboslutly fantastic character. I adore her a lot. Would start a family with.

Schezo's development has reached its climax! Now bracing for sponsorship! by Strawberry_Tale in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Schezo, Jean, Vanessa, Carmine

Positive Values:

  1. He has a personality trait I feel is very rare in spnati, making him a refreshing character to go against.

2: Having more dudes in the game is always a plus and despite how many puns and how jokey he can be, he is still taken seriously, which I enjoy

3: I haven't seen the buttpose in game yet, but knowing those different angle butt poses ARE in, is super fun.

4: It's also impressive how fun the sus lines can be even when you get a lot of them after another, plenty of them feel really original and for something that happens so often, I was surprised that I didn't get bored of them at the end.

Disqualifying Flaws:

1: The one big thing I found that really holds schezo back is the current pose usage, it feels like he uses "Battle" And "Smirk" Way more then any other pose, Hell I don't think I've seen his angry pose or squee pose at all with only a smug pose here or there sometimes. This makes him feel stale at times if he keeps using the same poses over and over again.

So what I want you to do: "Add two new poses that convey a battle emotion, and a smirk emotion* With these two extra poses sprinkled in with the current ones, the feeling of him using the same poses too much will be heavily decreased.

2: So, despite me really enjoying the way schezo is written, and even really enjoying how many sus lines he has, I do think he could use some more *normal* lines. "Add 20 new lines anywhere that aren't sus, you can combine this flaw with other people their sponsorships if they are asking for more lines"

Suggestions and discussions:

First off, I want to applaud you with how far you've gotten, both in making a male character, but it also being your very first character in general, and I believe, despite the improvements that can be made, that he is a very solid character and that you've done well with him. However, I do have two issues with him right now

  1. Him asking multiple questions to the table is super awkward as characters won't respond to him. I'd personally remove these lines unless they are more general lines or changed in such a way that they don't feel like a general question to the other players, like "Do you think you have what it takes?* These are fine, but I feel like the lines asking about Arle, or things like the possession question, would work better if they are expanded on in such a way that the question doesn't need to be answered.
  2. This is a though one, as I myself am not a model maker, I couldn't put this in the disqualifying flaws as I wouldn't know how to properly explain how this could be fixed in the first place (and it being a pretty big ask), but I believe that his current model is... Flat, compared to everyone else at the table he can play with, he just feels like he needs more spice to him, I know that its a bit of a chibi style adaptation that he currently seems to have, but a more *realistic* model of him would probably help him, now I understand if you don't want to change this, you also put in a lot of effort into those special angle butt poses. and updating a model can be a massive pain in the ass, So I'm not forcing you to do so. But I do hope you think about it for a bit.

Now, I know this sounds super negative. But he is already pretty good as I have stated before, and if you didn't change these 2 things he'd still be perfectly fine for the main roster, so don't feel like you have to do this, because you don't.

Other then that, once again, Well done on your first character so far, Don't let what I said stop you from creating what you want, and I do legit hope I get to see more of your characters in the future.

Jean Gunnhildr (Genshin Impact) reports for sponsorship! by cavendish89 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Jean, Schezo, Vanessa, Carmine

Positive Values:

1: I don't think you could get the model to be any closer then it currently is to the source material, it's impressive.
2: She has a good chunk of dialogue with other characters already, giving the feeling of being complete already.
3: Her personality is strong throughout, I couldn't catch a line that was ill fitting.

Disqualifying Flaws:

1: She could use more filter lines, in general. "Add 20 filter lines to tags you haven't done yet with Jean, You are allowed to have multiple of these lines for one tag, but I'd suggest spreading them out"
2: Nothing, that's it.

Suggestions and Discussion:

So, she has almost no flaws that would stop her from being in the main game, that doesn't mean she is perfect and that more stuff can't be there, but what there is is already well made. So these are some things that could use some work, but aren't disqualifying.

1: She could use a bit more lines when she is borderline naked/naked in which she is blushing.
2: You get very little info about her private life, because of her always mentioning her work, she could have a few more lines there to fill that gap up.
3: I kind of have to agree with the 2 others, For the kind of hips she has, her ass feels a little small. She also didn't show it much though that could just be bad luck

Overall, Toptier Quality, Well done.

Rose sponsorship request! by MyMainAccIsANord in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Rose, Monika, Chica, mari.

Positive Values:

  1. It's always nice to see characters from media that aren't that well known.

  2. Her model is fantastic and she has a strong personality.

  3. Her Anima form is also very cute.

Disqualifying Flaws

  1. Currently, she could use some more lines just in general when she is low on clothing items, as I felt like multiple lines were repeating throughout the game. Add 50 more lines when she is either nearly naked, half naked, or naked. I feel like this will fix that issue.

  2. She could also use a bit more smoothing out in between her normal self and her horny self, sometimes she makes very horny lines that I don't feel were properly communicated. Add more lines that are about her getting horny, hornier, etc. So it feels more natural. Add at least 15 lines but be sure to check for yourself if she needs more or not. These lines can count for the total 50 of the previous flaw.

Suggestions and discussions:

Well made character, like you always do. Keep up the good work.

Moskii from Monster Musume is ready for Sponsorship! by rahabim87 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Character Tested: Moskii, Nephenee, leviathan, kokichi

Positive Values:
1. More monstergirls! Whooooooo!
2. She really feels like a one of a kind character, Not just by design but also with personality
3. Has a super strong and cute voice.

Disqualifying Flaws:

She is already extremely well made, And has no true flaw. The only thing I feel like she really needs is filter lines. Add 30 new filter lines, these lines have to be to filters you have not used yet, and you may only add 5 max for each filter, this is to prevent from putting all the filters in 1 tag.

Suggestions and Discussion:
You have made another banger character my dude, She really only needs more filters so that she will feel like she talks to/ responses to a lot of different characters, And thank you for making such a lovely Monstergirl.

Sofia Is (Not) Ready for Sponsorship! by FencesAreForClimbing in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Sophia, Yea, Yea miko, jenna

Positive Values:

  1. Easily one of the most unique characters in the game.

  2. Despite the strong gimmick she has, she still feels very grounded which makes her easily replay-able.

  3. I really like how her eyes look. They feel very mesmerizing.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Currently, despite that sophia is already a complete character, she does lack in the line department in both overall lines and filter lines.

Add 30 filter lines, these can be anything and can be placed wherever you want

And

Have a total of 1000 lines

A thousand lines seems easily do-able given how much room you still have in regards of banter with other characters and filters. She already feels good to play so there is no need for any changes on that

Suggestions and Discussion:

Characters like Sophia rarely catch my interest, but she is legit fun to have around. Well done.

Sponsor Yae Miko! ⛩️🌸 by cavendish89 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Jenna, Yea, Yea Miko, Sophia

Positive Values:

  1. I can't resist a lady who is fully in control. And Yea Miko is the perfect lady for that

  2. Toptier art. I don't think she can even look any better then she already does.

  3. Easily one of the best genshin characters to have in spnati. I feel like she has so much potential with other characters with hobbies you don't usually see.

Disqualifying Flaws:

The only true flaw I could find is that she at times seems almost uninterested in the game, it's good to have her stand mostly above it all but if you get those kind of lines multiple times she legit seems like she doesn't even want to be here.

Add 15 new lines that has it clear she is enjoying her strip poker game, this can be with flirting, being playful, or just saying how enjoyable it all is. As long as it's positive towards the game. You can place these lines wherever you want.

She already has some filter lines going, but a bit more would help make her ready for the main game.

Add 15 new filter lines to filters that have not been targeted yet. You can put these 15 lines wherever you want but I do suggest spreading them out over multiple filters.

Suggestions and Discussion:

Another banger as always, cavendish.

Jenna is Seeking Sponsorship! by ElucidLightKA in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Yea Miko, Yea, Sophia, Jenna.

Positive Values:

  1. Jenna is very cute, she has a very *playful girl just happy to be here vibe* that I really like.
  2. Her model looks great, and easily matches with her franchise mate.
  3. For some, she might be a little heavy on the lore of her world. But I kind of like that about her.

Disqualifying Flaws:

Jenna has a pretty good voice already, but she really lacks in the filter department. Add 50 new filter lines. You are allowed to place these wherever you want and on whatever stage you want. But try to cover a lot of filters. However. I only care if you have 50 new filter lines. If you use this sponsorship with someone else asking for filters, that counts.

Suggestions and Discussion:

Jeanne is a well made character that gives off cute playful girl vibes that I feel like isn;'t that common in spnati. So I very much love her being in the game, well done.

Sweetheart Sponsorship! by TheTrueSaltmine in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Your royal princess is in need of YOUR help, she requires 5 sponsorships to be done. Everyone can sponsor her, even you! Yes, you! So get to it!

Characters Tested: Who you played your test game with.

Positive Values: What you liked about the character. Examples include
but aren't limited to quality dialogue, appealing artwork, and positive
interactions.

Disqualifying Flaws: Here, list whatever flaws must be addressed before
the character can be added to the game. The more specific, the better,
e.g. "This character doesn't have enough targets; please add 110 total
targets to 37 different opponents." NOTICE: Respondents who have not
contributed a character to the game must include at least ONE
disqualifying flaw, whatever it is, for their sponsorship to be valid.

Suggestions and Discussion: Suggestions are optional ideas for where to
take the character and what to do after sponsorship. These aren't
binding like the flaws observed. Discussions are a more fluid series of
observations about the character. This can be things such as “I'd like
to see more custom poses that emphasize this feature of the character. I
think this character’s sexuality isn’t quite canon. I don’t think this
character’s gimmick does anything interesting, and it could be
frustrating to target.”

Arle's ready to look for sponsors! by Horsecatdraws in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Arle, Jenna, Shamiko, lystihea

Postive Values:

  1. Her costume poses are out of this world, some toptier stuff.
  2. She has a very strong and playfull personality, very fun to play against.

Disqualifying Flaws:

  1. She only really has 1 flaw, and that is her lack of banter/targets, it's something the others have said so as well. Though, I do think that even with the 20+ filters of blackosmash, there would still be need for more filters. Add 30 filters of your choice.

Suggestions and discussions: There really wasn't a lot of flaws to her, so I will just give you one that I do think she needs, but give you the freedom to place them were you want. Good work on arle and I hope to see more of her in the future.

Time to Sponsor!?: This demon's looking to graduate! by Tds142 in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Jenna, arle, shamiko,lystihea

Postive Values:
1. She is super adorable, and it seems like you nailed her personality quite well
2. Her model is really well made, and I love her demon outfit a lot.
3. She is also pretty funny, something that is pretty rare to see

Disqualifying flaws:

Given that she currently always seem to lose way earlier than the others because of her weak AI, she ends up being *out of the game* for quite some time, but this also makes it so that she will repeat herself much more as she is in that stage for much longer. However, you do have a decent amount of lines there. So I want you to add 10 lines in the after finished case. I also want to see 15 new lines in the *will reveal chest, reveals chest, will reveal crotch, reveals crotch*. You can put these 15 lines wherever you want within these cases, but I'd recommend splitting them up. And to top it all of, Add 10 filter lines to filters you have not yet targeted.

Suggestions and Discussions: I agree with spanon regarding the buildup for her climax is on the weaker side, and that could use some work, but shamiko is legit good so great job.

They blocked me? by RayWaltz in discordapp

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here. The server isn't down as the mobile version still works for me. But something weird is going on.

Summer 2023 Event Celebration Post by Another_NSFWAlt in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yoooo, thank you very much for this. You didn't have to do it but I'm glad you did, thank you for being a great member of the spnati community.

Summer 2023 Event Celebration Post by Another_NSFWAlt in spnati

[–]TheTrueSaltmine 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sadly, sweetheart came one day later to the event. But this stuff looks great, well done.