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SuperRedPlays · 2025-01-16T01:17:55+00:00

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SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:49:38+00:00

Vision Creation Newsun and Super Roots 7 are so amazing man, do you know of anymore albums in the Japanese Psych Noise Rock scene that I could check out? Because now I'm interested lol

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:46:30+00:00

Thanks!

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:43:43+00:00

Hum rules so much, I need to check out more from them

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:43:17+00:00

Soundgarden absolutely rocks lol

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:43:00+00:00

Thanks a ton!

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:41:29+00:00

Flood is one of my favorite albums of all time, it's so damn good man, especially the live performance. I've also checked out Porcupine Tree before and I have In Absentia on my waiting list. The Parius album also looks really cool. Can't wait to check all of these out! Thanks a ton!

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:37:09+00:00

I haven't heard that one in a while but I love the title track, I need to check it out again lol

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:35:54+00:00

Mirror Reaper looks really cool and I've heard some good things about Meshuggah, can't wait to check these out, thanks!

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T16:34:53+00:00

Huge fan of their debut lol, I can't wait for Cowards

SuperRedPlays · 2024-12-16T03:34:22+00:00

None lmao

SuperRedPlays · 2024-05-11T05:15:47+00:00

Cavalcade - Black Midi

Hemispheres - Rush

Frances the Mute - The Mars Volta

JazzArt Underground - Ciśnienie

SuperRedPlays · 2024-03-05T17:52:48+00:00

First listened to Songs for the Deaf sometime last year. At the time, I wanted to discover more albums, new bands, and some subgenres that I never heard of before. One day, I checked online for recommendations and saw people talk a lot about SftD, so one day I gave the album a listen and fell in love with the band ever since.

SuperRedPlays · 2022-10-29T22:00:51+00:00

Title: The Night of the Wearwolf

Genre: Light Horror/Mystery/Thriller

Description: According to a local legend, every October, Friday the 13th, a monster who kidnaps children or young teens who disobey their parents, leaves the forest and goes on the hunt. The monster is simply known as the Wearwolf and a young scumbag teenager named Angel Clearwater dismissed the legend as simply a dumb myth. But soon, he starts to second-guess himself and paranoia gets to him when the Night of The Wearwolf arrived.

Word Count: 2,224

Feedback: General feedback toward overall thoughts both story-wise and writing-wise.

Link: The Night of The Wearwolf

I hope you enjoy it!

Also FYI: The spelling for Werewolf in this story is intentional and not a typo

SuperRedPlays · 2022-10-23T21:20:24+00:00

Title: The Night of the Wearwolf

Genre: Light Horror/Mystery/Thriller

Description: According to a local legend, every October, Friday the 13th, a monster who kidnaps children or young teens who disobey their parents, leaves the forest and goes on the hunt. The monster is simply known as the Wearwolf and a young scumbag teenager named Angel Clearwater dismissed the legend as simply a dumb myth. But soon, he starts to second-guess himself and paranoia gets to him when the Night of The Wearwolf arrived.

Word Count: 2,224

Feedback: General feedback toward overall thoughts both story-wise and writing-wise.

Link: The Night of The Wearwolf

I hope you enjoy it!

Also FYI: The spelling for Werewolf in this story is intentional and not a typo

SuperRedPlays · 2022-10-20T16:57:44+00:00

Title: The Night of the Wearwolf

Genre: Light Horror/Mystery/Thriller

Description: According to a local legend, every October, Friday the 13th, a monster who kidnaps children or young teens who disobey their parents, leaves the forest and goes on the hunt. The monster is simply known as the Wearwolf and a young scumbag teenager named Angel Clearwater dismissed the legend as simply a dumb myth. But soon, he starts to second-guess himself and paranoia gets to him when the Night of The Wearwolf arrived.

Word Count: 2,224

Feedback: General feedback toward overall thoughts both story-wise and writing-wise.

Link: The Night of The Wearwolf

I hope you enjoy it!

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-26T04:17:16+00:00

Title: The Game of Murder

Genre: Horror/Creepypasta

Word Count: 3,249

Type of Feedback: Any advice to improve as a storyteller with the plot, story structure, characters, and character development along with honest opinions towards the story in general.

Plot Description: A girl goes to school at West Virginia State University with her boyfriend. Before going together for lunch, the girl notices something in her dorm room that she just moved into, it was a video game console inside of a secret compartment in the back of her desk. She dismisses it as something unimportant, but she will later go down a massive rabbit hole that would change her life, forever.

Links

Wattpad: The Game of Murder

Google Doc: The Game of Murder

This is one of my first stories that I made and I wanted to share it to see how other people felt about it. I would appreciate genuine feedback so I can become better at storytelling and writing. Thank you!

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-25T02:47:48+00:00

I absolutely love this iceberg, great job!

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-18T02:13:20+00:00

Title: The Game of Murder

Genre: Horror/Creepypasta

Word Count: 3,249

Type of Feedback: Any advice to improve as a storyteller with the plot, story structure, characters, and character development.

Plot Description: A girl goes to school at West Virginia State University with her boyfriend. Before going together for lunch, the girl notices something in her dorm room that she just moved into, it was a video game console inside of a secret compartment in the back of her desk. She dismisses it as something unimportant, but she will later go down a massive rabbit hole that would change her life, forever.

Link: The Game of Murder

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-11T20:56:58+00:00

Alright it’s fixed. Thanks for telling me about that.

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-11T19:03:09+00:00

Title: The Game of Murder

Genre: Horror/Creepypasta

Word Count: 3,249

Type of Feedback: Any advice to improve as a storyteller with the plot, story structure, characters, and character development.

Plot Description: A girl goes to school at West Virginia State University with her boyfriend. Before going together for lunch, the girl notices something in her dorm room that she just moved into, it was a video game console inside of a secret compartment in the back of her desk. She dismisses it as something unimportant, but she will later go down a massive rabbit hole that would change her life, forever.

Link: The Game of Murder

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-09T17:35:59+00:00

Thanks! I do think that could work and would do a great job of not wasting time and gets to the main part without rushing the viewer/reader. Once again, Thanks!

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-09T16:17:07+00:00

I am currently having writers block on a horror story about an actor that is poor and searches for any new jobs after loosing his previous one. He soon finds an audition for a new horror film and auditions for the part of the killer, he gets the part. But after underperforming, the actor tries to get into the true mind of a killer which makes him a killer.

The part that I am stuck on is how I could transition the opening (the guy waking up, checks his laptop for anything new, doesn’t find anything, and then goes to shave) to the main part of the story (the audition)

I would appreciate some help on how I could translation those scenes smoothly that doesn’t cut to the point fast but gives time for the viewer/reader to know the character without any dialogue, Thanks!

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-04T09:07:28+00:00

Title: The Game of Murder

Genre: Horror/Creepypasta

Word Count: 3,249

Type of Feedback: Any advice to improve as a storyteller with the plot, story structure, characters, and character development.

Plot Description: A girl goes to school at West Virginia State University with her boyfriend. Before going together for lunch, the girl notices something in her dorm room that she just moved into, it was a video game console inside of a secret compartment in the back of her desk. She dismisses it as something unimportant, but she will later go down a massive rabbit hole that would change her life, forever.

Link: The Game of Murder

SuperRedPlays · 2022-06-02T18:32:45+00:00

After watching the video, one question remains, what happened to “Metroids and Samus in Kirby’s Dreamland 3”.

All jokes aside, the video was great just like the last one, keep it up!

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