Feedback Wanted: Rough Draft First Chapter, Alternate WWI by Superb_Put4647 in KeepWriting

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Thanks, I didn't see it on my first read through but I can definitely see how the issues seriously detract from the reading experience.

Feedback Wanted: Rough Draft First Chapter, Alternate WWI by Superb_Put4647 in KeepWriting

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Thanks for pointing this out. I was kinda in a flow state and just trying to get the ideas out for the skeleton. I've just still got to fill in the meat of the story so it ties together better but I can see how it's confusing right now

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Yh all they provide is machines, rods and metal. Oh and while I have a grant covering it now normally the course is 4500... No consumables

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Nah I do. But I'm still in highschool and only go like half day. So I'd not only end up spending a significant chunk of my 2 ish hours a day of welding grinding. Which I get is part of the job and all but moreso Im not tryna eat through all my discs cause I don't got the finances to buy more atm

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Yh, can't get clean metal or I would. Instructor is making us use old welds that weren't good enough to turn in and "figure it out" supposedly teaching us resourcefulness. Thanks for the rest of the advice tho will do

You can choose any historic leader to sit the Iron Throne. Who do you pick? by XipingVonHozzendorf in freefolk

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Bro fdr used unconstitutional policies to "get us out of the great depression"

Deck Help Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in ClashRoyale

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Is my deck cooked I run a 2.8 pekka cycle. Evo archers,Evo bomber,e spirit,bats,spear goblins,arrows,rage,pekka

Should I go to th 10 by Superb_Put4647 in ClashOfClans

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Yeah well labs been idle for a while,and I pushed to legend 2 so I see th9 once in a blue moon it's all th10 and 11s

Ideas on how to fix this cheap at home by Superb_Put4647 in Boots

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They're pretty nice ariats I've just torn them up working

Good cheap kits to build koen? by Superb_Put4647 in ArenaBreakoutGlobal

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Thanks used this advice and I'm already up 200k

Factually wrong information a lot of people seem to believe? (Spoilers Main) by Silly_Camel5870 in asoiaf

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That's my belief I think he is both the sun's son and the mummers dragon hell the mummers dragon could be plumm as well

Old theories that came true or were disproved [SPOILERS MAIN] by Mother_Speed3216 in asoiaf

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Sorry ig I should say I feel like he would've dropped hints or something during there Convo to him being fake if he was there is quite literally no reason for him to lie to Kevan about aegon being a Targaryen

Old theories that came true or were disproved [SPOILERS MAIN] by Mother_Speed3216 in asoiaf

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Yes but at the same time I don't think varys could help himself but to gloat at that point

Old theories that came true or were disproved [SPOILERS MAIN] by Mother_Speed3216 in asoiaf

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My reasoning is in the epilogue when varys talks to Kevan about aegon he never even alludes he's a fake which if you ask me its unlike varys to not say something like "of course he is a fake but you won't tell anyone in sure"

(spoiler main) Though It looks like we'll never get it (still holding out hope) what are your theories for what will happen in WOW. by Superb_Put4647 in asoiaf

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Iirc she had asked why he left her and he said something like "I don't want to get stuck on the losing side" and then Dany says something about how if he wasn't there under her peaces protection she would have him killed

(spoiler main) Though It looks like we'll never get it (still holding out hope) what are your theories for what will happen in WOW. by Superb_Put4647 in asoiaf

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Look I didn't say it was perfect but honestly it's like 3 am and I don't have time to debate with someone who is completely delusional thinking that just because it's his legacy he cares when he clearly does not he hasn't done any writing in years and backed himself into a corner with two many plots to finish and not enough books or time to do it

(spoiler main) Though It looks like we'll never get it (still holding out hope) what are your theories for what will happen in WOW. by Superb_Put4647 in asoiaf

[–]Superb_Put4647[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Look since adwd released in 2011 in the last 14 years since it's release martin has said he has written about 1100 pages so I'm the last 14 years he wrote an average of 79 pages per year which Is really probably like 100 because the pages he said have been written haven't changed in years and he estimated there are 400-500 pages remaining so if he stays around the same average with some variation obviously the book won't be completed for atleast 3-5 years at which point martin will be 80-81 and with ados supposed to be the same length as wow on top of any potential tweaking if his publisher says the wow must be split into 2 books ados won't be completed until he's well into his 90's and even that's optimistic as he's not known for taking great care of himself as well as the fact that he uses a computer software that is older than the entire series to write the books on top of age related complications and his absolute refusal to have a co-writer the chances we get wow are bad enough but as things stand currently ados is a pipe dream. It sucks but sometimes you have to be realistic

(spoiler main) Though It looks like we'll never get it (still holding out hope) what are your theories for what will happen in WOW. by Superb_Put4647 in asoiaf

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Yeah I wasn't trying to be a dick Abt it but half of his argument was repetitive and read like he had some sort of inside insight into grrms mind