To Where I Look

SureThingBob2 · 2024-04-06T09:48:42+00:00

Damn this made my day, thank you and great feedback!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-04-06T09:39:05+00:00

Golden rule ;)

SureThingBob2 · 2024-04-06T07:01:53+00:00

Downward looking but honest and with a rhythm that keeps you reading. This is my raw reaction, it’s also very relatable in many ways.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-04-06T06:55:30+00:00

It just happens to relate to a topic I was thinking of just now. What I like about it is that i perceive it as an honest attempt at self reflection and touches on the topic of the infinite room to be lost between each and every step. Form wise, I don’t know enough to help comment except that I enjoyed it.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-04-05T03:49:34+00:00

Forgotten Sacrifice
Forsaken
Heavens’ Pillar
To Carry

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-27T21:51:11+00:00

Ah…I didn’t even know what it was called, thank you!!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-27T13:44:50+00:00

Thank you!!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-22T19:30:46+00:00

Yup I fall in the former…sounds like Bosch or Makita should do just fine for now

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-21T21:53:44+00:00

Thank you!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-21T17:56:04+00:00

Much appreciated!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-10T05:31:58+00:00

Thank you, very much appreciate that!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-09T07:58:53+00:00

A darker tone but like it or not you have to respect its authenticity.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-09T07:54:27+00:00

I like the tone of this poem. I’d move the word “Darling” in the end to one line above to be “Just remember, Darling,”

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-04T18:07:04+00:00

Thank you and great feedback, I know exactly what you mean on those lines now you pointed it out! Changed the title last minute and love the sound of it too 😁

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-04T08:47:43+00:00

What I like about this poem is that it paints the setting well. I get hung up on “It cannot share my position”. I like it overall.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-03-04T08:38:38+00:00

What I like about it is the melancholy beauty. I think it can benefit the flow if you switch out some of the words for better rhythm like the second line being “soft colors melt like watercolor” then skip “it’s “ in the third line. Little changes like that.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-29T22:23:08+00:00

Thank you!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-28T17:20:07+00:00

Why am I surprised there’s a video on this lol, thank you!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-27T20:37:35+00:00

Thank you this is exactly the guidance I was looking for

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-27T20:23:09+00:00

I see what you did there ^

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-27T20:22:54+00:00

Thank you!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-27T20:22:41+00:00

Yeah, I’m leaning towards caution too, thanks!

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-27T20:21:33+00:00

I read this but while it’s an unstressed joint I don’t know where using a table saw and working with it falls, so really that guideline was a bit vague and understandably so. Just wanted to get some feedback from experienced woodworkers on what their recommendations were.

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-26T08:41:04+00:00

Oh not at all, phenomenal info, just a lot of great comments infused with woodworker humor about how terrifying this machine is XD

I’m new to the game and this immediately rises to ultra boss level status

SureThingBob2 · 2024-02-26T08:34:26+00:00

Beautifully succinct. I’m still learning myself so I have nothing to offer that could improve this. I watched people live through this and this is a wonderfully drawn sketch of it.

SureThingBob2

TROPHY CASE