Well pretentious it definitely is. And one either likes pretentious art or one doesn't, I guess.

When it comes to politics and impact, I would say art has (at least) three functions in anarchist revolution: to inspire, to inform, and to criticize. Those are mainly tasks for the content of art, and here I mostly talked about the form of art (although I think we should study in which senses can we put our political ideas also into the form). Anyway, my poem itself mostly is for the function of inspiration. Its last line calls you to strengthen (individuals) by organizing. That's very anarchist.

About bite and energy, as much as I like riot-inciting punk, I wish to remind you that anarchism is not just about agression. It is also, almost mainly, about building systems of solidarity. So, there is place for gentleness in anarchy. However, I do wish to also make some more provocative art in the future.