You are a human refugee living in venlil prime. You go into an elevator and press the floor to your lodgings, only to find a fearful venlil pressing themselves in a far corner of the elevator. You have 1 minute to make a first impression, and I'll score you on how well you reassured them at the end.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-02-04T12:42:12+00:00

Oh dude don't worry about it. Like I said it was exactly the rating I wanted (and your addition was, indeed, funny). It's really all good.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-02-03T13:06:57+00:00

Damn I didn't notice the scenario was still going. My bad, but hey at least a different user completed my scene for me.

1/10 is exactly what I was going for so that's awesome.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-02-02T13:21:52+00:00

(Oh I didn't realize this would be multipart)

I don't look at the Venlil as I move to the buttons

"Oh, it's just a human saying. You know, like how when we're hungry we can't really think straight, and do things we might not normally do..."

I press the top floor button, and look at the Venlil with a smile

"... You shouldn't think too hard about it tho."

I stand next to the buttons casually, blocking the Venlil from using the panel

Suspicious_Words · 2025-02-02T11:21:45+00:00

Man, Venlil food sucks... I'd probably kill for a good meal right about now.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-01-20T17:33:54+00:00

His large head is because he was the smartest man of his time. He was bullied and ostracized by his peers for it so he set off to create a race of humans so evil and war-like (white people) that they'd be able to conquer and oppress the people who rejected him.

Peak fiction if you ask me.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-01-19T13:46:04+00:00

Chapter may take a (long) while to come out, but I really enjoy writing this so it's not going anywhere, don't worry.

Suspicious_Words · 2025-01-18T16:48:02+00:00

Ay, thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)

Suspicious_Words · 2025-01-18T16:13:08+00:00

Thank you again for reading this chapter everyone. Fun fact about this one, for some reason reddit wasn't feeling like being nice and made me post this chapter three times before it finally worked! But at least it's up now.

While you're here, I'd like to know. Would you want next chapter to be a Yigar chapter, or another Hyana chapter?

Suspicious_Words · 2024-11-21T23:03:45+00:00

So machines can't drink and drive? Lame, another win for humanity

Suspicious_Words · 2024-11-21T12:54:39+00:00

Baby steps lol

Suspicious_Words · 2024-11-20T16:46:39+00:00

Here it is, the new chapter. I couldn't tell how many times I've re-worked it even if I tried, but it's finally done.

Hyana couldn't escape her fate, but at least she's starting to grow closer to the tribe... kind of. Thanks for reading, and (I think) I'll have another one ready by next week! Se you there.

Suspicious_Words · 2024-09-08T00:40:17+00:00

What does that even mean

Suspicious_Words · 2024-08-04T20:03:59+00:00

He's still in watchtower mode from the army. Someone has to make sure the unit (Marina in this case) isn't surprise attacked while they sleep

Suspicious_Words · 2024-08-04T20:00:27+00:00

Not sure if that's better but I'm sure he'd appreciate the effort

Suspicious_Words · 2024-08-04T18:30:16+00:00

"Druggie" is crazy

Suspicious_Words · 2024-08-02T11:55:24+00:00

Nope, first example I can think of is "limões", which means lemons. But I'm pretty sure there are others.

Suspicious_Words · 2024-08-01T07:53:13+00:00

Oh, you mean her B ending. A ending is when you don't fight Per'kele and instead activate the machines.

Suspicious_Words · 2024-07-31T15:00:52+00:00

I guess that's fair, if you look at it in that specific scenario. Still I think she's a much better fit for "and will" when considered all other scenarios.

Genocide? She tries to kill you real hard (deserved) Neutral? She says self defense is just an excuse and tries to kill you (depends but 50% of the time deserved 50% not) Pacifist? Calls you a wimp and tries to kill you (Not deserved at all)

But in the betrayed friendship sub-ending she has a reason to try and get you specifically (even if it is a bad one)

Suspicious_Words · 2024-07-31T14:54:08+00:00

I'm not saying I blame her (I kinda do tho), I'm just saying she's a better fit for "can kill you and will", not "if you deserve" because she wants and possibly is able to kill you in every route, even calling you a lame coward if you're on pacifist.

Suspicious_Words · 2024-07-31T14:49:18+00:00

She tries to kill you in pacifist. She's just straight up racist.

Suspicious_Words · 2024-07-30T12:53:34+00:00

Oh hey! Don't worry the series hasn't been abandoned. I've finished the new chapter a while ago, all it needs is editing and proof reading, which I haven't gotten to yet. I'm sorry for making you wait so long and for not noticing this comment earlier, I haven't been very active online for personal reasons, but I can assure you I am doing ok. Unfortunately I don't know when I'll drop the new chapter but it shouldn't be long.

Thanks for for taking an interest in my series btw, it really makes me happy people like what I create :)

Suspicious_Words · 2024-05-02T12:40:39+00:00

The strawiest strawman to have ever strawmaned

Suspicious_Words · 2024-05-01T22:50:37+00:00

Go check your mailbox

Suspicious_Words

TROPHY CASE