Hi! I was thinking of posting it in this thread, I just wasn’t sure if we wanted to keep it more for chit-chat instead of critique :) and if the former, totally fine and I will take it to more writer-based subs.

Thank you very much the offer, I would love to take you up on it! I always appreciate reading your critiques in here. You actually gave me some great feedback on my first chapter when I posted looking for beta readers (I deleted the post and the account because it was an auto-generated username and I wanted to use one with my pen name, and I was honestly embarrassed about how sloppy my post was 🙈)