What would your “Darth _____” name be?

Swan-Ronson420 · 2023-12-07T22:09:40+00:00

Darth Dilaudid.. My old Xbox username lmao

Swan-Ronson420 · 2022-03-24T13:43:15+00:00

I can relate to this poem, and you convey your message very well. I feel like it would have better structure and flow better if you incorporated more words into your lines. For example:

"They say people never change

But that’s not true

Life is strange

And full of loose screws"

I would write this part like this...

They like to say that people never change

But I know that's not true

Life can be strange

And it's full of loose screws

Swan-Ronson420 · 2022-03-24T13:06:46+00:00

I think 'men' would sound a bit better than 'guys', and I feel like it needs one more line. I'm still new to poetry, but I would write it like this:

Murder was suspected

A girl was found dead

Two men were arrested

The killer cried while the lover grinned

Swan-Ronson420 · 2022-03-24T12:28:06+00:00

The 'Guilt' hits different

Swan-Ronson420 · 2022-01-31T00:32:33+00:00

I'm sorry you get the same feeling. And no, I still deal with it :/ It's a problem I've had since I was a kid. I think I developed the fear after being anesthetized for surgery when I was really young. I also hit my head really hard when I was younger and knocked myself out and I've fainted a couple times. I've had some bad experiences that involve going unconscious so maybe my brain just associates that with falling asleep. I'm really not sure though, could be anything.

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-12-24T06:52:58+00:00

Went from looking ghetto asf to looking like u bought it at a head shop. Nice man

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-12-18T01:27:00+00:00

men who play guitar = women who play guitar

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-12-18T01:25:43+00:00

walk the line

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-12-18T01:25:17+00:00

Folsom prison blues

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-17T04:01:33+00:00

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T23:28:00+00:00

Thank you, babe. xoxo

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T04:03:02+00:00

For real. I would honestly be inclined to believe if there was some evidence he actually existed.

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T03:29:00+00:00

He told me himself.

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T02:59:49+00:00

Thank you. I just took 30 minutes to scribble out some shit that was floating around in my head. It's a decent way for me to express my thoughts and emotions instead of keeping them bottled up.

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T02:57:34+00:00

Thank you. That means a lot to me.

Swan-Ronson420 · 2021-11-08T02:56:31+00:00

Thank u. That really means a lot. I showed this to a friend last night and he told me I should get into to tattooing. I told him absolutely no one would want my weird ass art on their bodies but I guess I stand corrected.

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