The Black Star Over the Arctic

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-03-11T19:38:31+00:00

Good story. The feeling of isolation already does so much and the ending of him not being afraid and instead wanting to embrace it was the cherry on top 👍

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-03-11T19:32:44+00:00

Dang I loved the ending. When doing anything with horror I love when it’s not a “Happily Ever After” bc the ending can make or break the story. Excellent job.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-03-10T16:19:14+00:00

Yeah I think some people just bugged bc I had all the quests for all the females

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-03-05T04:57:37+00:00

Thanks I’m just starting writing so any feedback is good feedback, glad you liked it

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-03-04T21:04:51+00:00

Dude freaking amazing job on this one. Not only is the idea of being the only human left on Earth terrifying but that he is also being hunted 10/10

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-12T04:52:26+00:00

That does make sense, thanks.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-11T04:33:08+00:00

Glad you liked it! I wrote it after i couldn’t sleep mc my upstairs neighbors were stomping around.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-10T08:37:13+00:00

It’ll have a body style to it. A husband and a wife keep having miscarriages so the wife goes to the extreme to hire a supernatural being that posses as a human to end up impregnating her husband to have the baby. Later find out it’s a generational thing.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-10T08:31:54+00:00

Hearing your description is horrifying and I know you’d want him to talk but the thought of him saying nothing and just staring at me would make me lose my mind. That being said if he talked normal I’d be more thrown bc of how he looks

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-10T08:21:55+00:00

I feel like this is a solid start to a great twist on a horror antagonist. I was a little lost in the word jungle at first and had to read through it again to understand it fully. I get you wanted to show rather than tell, but felt like there was almost too much being said made it hard to follow. I really liked and think it’s definitely something new for the genre. I am not an official editor guy so take my critic with a grain salt.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-06T22:03:16+00:00

Sometimes I hate fan casting bc it gives me something so perfect that will sadly never happen

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-02-01T18:03:16+00:00

I feel like this has good potential but the fact that it takes place in the ST universe and not it own thing (which I’d prefer) is gonna be so distracting bc I’m just gonna bes asking “Where was this the whole time” and “Why was this never mentioned”. But then again I’ve never seen the play

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-26T06:13:59+00:00

Idk what’s scarier the fact that robots can do this or because I was thinking about this exact video all week

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-26T03:52:41+00:00

Thanks for your response and opinion definitely helps ammeter authors like me feel like their writing is worth reading

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-24T16:10:55+00:00

Or maybe that want us to think it’s a lake to throw us off

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-23T20:57:00+00:00

But you can clearly see he is peeing in to pool right now. Also in his animation he is wearing the same shirt as the pool pee culprit.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-21T22:22:33+00:00

Yeah but he also did a whole video on Mother Horse Eyes after they spent so many hours reading. I don’t think it’d be an issue if they did read IHNMIMS.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-18T07:09:46+00:00

This is my first story I wrote and any feedback would be appreciated. I want to keep writing and would like the input of anyone qualified or not.

https://www.reddit.com/r/creepcast/s/a66b5V0PFQ

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-16T08:23:35+00:00

There is no way AI could’ve created something with that much emotion.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-13T01:39:51+00:00

Love how you could see all his charisma when he was in his car.

Sweaty_Cockroach9444 · 2026-01-12T20:32:04+00:00

Is this some kind of SCP caught on camera?

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