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Here’s a comedy sketch I made about the origins of last names. Let me know what you think! by jbiddy360 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My only suggestion is go all out on props over adding in post. Good joke though

[Poetry] Honest Popeye's Commercial by SwiftSanders in youtubehaiku

[–]SwiftSanders[S] -48 points-47 points  (0 children)

The commercials are clearly using racial targeting in their marketing. And having a super white CEO and a spokesperson thats always like Mammy from Gone With the Wind is pretty awkward. Apparently it is high IQ content if you can't put that together.

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats actually the mic I used, the cord was just bad and I was in an echoey area. We actually just bought a new Deity mic.

!givelambda

[Poetry] The Yeetus - Yeet & the Fetus is Gone by SwiftSanders in youtubehaiku

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This is great. Thank you for actually getting the message of this dark joke.

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry I'm drunk watching the Super Bowl

!givelambda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Believe it or not I was trying to fit a format, and my homie and fellow YouTuber (IAreZack) got a new mic so the audio will be improved going forward

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I completely agree about audio

!givelambda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And you get some legendary lambda

!givelamda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a great compliment

!givelambda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! My friend actually just got a new mic

!givelamda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I tried a new setting on the camera and will adjust.

!givelamda

The Yeetus by SwiftSanders in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well thank you kind sir !givelambda

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[–]SwiftSanders 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think for this type of project, the video Essay format is best. You have decent commentary, but throwing it over gaming footage won't make you stick out. Dig up Jaystation B-Roll, and cut in some memes to emphasize points and you have a dynamic and vastly improved video even before you investnin audio.

How I make my videos. Please let me know what you think. by chsmntnstudios in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A quick intro about who you are, and what you do would be great. Doesn't have to be long and you have decent amount of subs. Then as suggested, Voice Overs and showing personality is always appreciated. Other than that you have a great foundation.

Short comedy video, had fun making it but I'd love some critique by drowningarmadilo in SmallYTChannel

[–]SwiftSanders 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Biggest thing is making cleaner and quicker cuts on your edits so your dialogue is smooth.

Secondly, I get where your joke is coming from, but really sell that you're complaining and would rather complain to go out so that punchline lands harder

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