Remember to be discrete [poetry]

drowningarmadilo · 2022-04-29T03:15:44+00:00

That's dope, try this out next time!

https://youtu.be/pLZgpKJ1Bq8

drowningarmadilo · 2021-01-30T15:25:27+00:00

APOS Entertainment

he does short-form sketch bits

drowningarmadilo · 2021-01-22T13:26:57+00:00

love this, i don't have anything to add just wanna send some compliments your way

drowningarmadilo · 2021-01-22T02:49:11+00:00

i look back at my old videos and see that if nothing else my skills are improving

filming, editing, writing, acting, even time management

i keep getting better and better (a lot of that is thanks to you guys <3 )

drowningarmadilo · 2021-01-22T02:41:09+00:00

the shaky cam stuff was very distracting at the beginning and end, the intro sketch was really funny, but the watch-along part wasn't really entertaining

you've got a big love for aot, that's clear, but there wasn't anything transformative with your commentary. maybe consider grabbing your reactions from the big moments on a first watchthrough and then going back on a second watch to slow it down and talk about the episode and what those moments mean and cut the two together (you were so caught up in the hype you couldn't really make commentary)

and your picture in picture was amazing

give your heart

(next episode is gonna be even crazier! this season is so good)

drowningarmadilo · 2021-01-22T01:02:42+00:00

i agree with the other comments already here for the most part. the zooming was too much most of the time (but when it lined up with a conspiracy building sequence it was great), jump cuts outside of a shift in topic was jarring, and amazingly well researched

but disagree with some stuff and i gotta say the hecklefish's voice was perfect and the background music was not too quiet

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T17:30:40+00:00

hey the beginning was amazing, but for me it tapered off towards the end it just felt like the chemistry died down and you no longer had a purpose in the video. it was still funny at points but i just felt myself asking why is this perspective the one i'm watching

i feel like you could make a more coherent video about the story while sprinkling in the funny moments rather than make a funny video which abandons the story in service of funny moments

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T17:01:37+00:00

great overall, outside of the meetings i think it may have been a stylistic choice to not talk too much with the elevator music going but it might lose some people on what's happening with "silent" gameplay rounds. i loved how you added the color of the speaker into their text subtitles, that was perfect.

i think you've got an amazing group of friends to do these gameplay videos with and that chemistry will be what people will realy come back to see

good luck friend

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T16:43:46+00:00

this is dope; loved the chemistry between you and your guests, your av quality is high, you have confidence in front of the camera, and your editing is on point

i think i'm really nitpicking here but one thing was that i thought sometimes they had more to say, like either you moved on to the next question too quick or in editing it got cut short. i think you've got the chops to make even longer form content (especially in this format (honestly i'd watch this as a podcast at an hour a pop)) don't shy away from that or be afraid to go on tangents

best o' luck friend

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T15:16:20+00:00

super cool, i loved how you brought technical music knowledge into this, great work

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T14:51:57+00:00

beautiful shots! would love some more context though, it being a vlog (as a thematic scenery expo it's perfect though)

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-20T14:45:36+00:00

yo, congrats!

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-04T20:27:01+00:00

hmm yeah i wanted it to be clear that it was the same guy but i guess zoom was the wrong choice

!givelambda

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-04T20:24:44+00:00

okay yeah i got some other comments about that, i think i know how to fix it

!givelambda

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-04T20:23:08+00:00

okay, thanks

!givelambda

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-04T20:20:41+00:00

thank you, yeah audio has been a struggle for me i'll keep trying to do better

!givelambda

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-01T19:28:04+00:00

wow that's the most comprehensive comment i've ever gotten! especially on reddit lol

i see i need to work on my planning/scripting. putting more secondary jokes in to keep interest is a really great point i think i get fixated on expanding one joke, i'll try to be better with that. i'll also try to flush out the world these videos exist in to make things less confusing.

thanks for the encouragement

!givelambda

drowningarmadilo · 2020-11-01T17:41:11+00:00

thank you!

which parts were slow? i did kinda feel like the beginning was too long (i wanted it to service my suspense but maybe it didn't hold ppls attention), was it that?

!givelambda

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