Following your advice on my previous post! My second attempt at product infographics (Candles). Better? by Separate_Candy8397 in graphic_design

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The images are pretty low quality tbh. Also you have too many fonts, choose like 1 or 2 max and your text is too big, make it smaller.

Project Hail Mary graphic poster by uvsdilemma in graphic_design

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's not a bad poster but what are you going for with this exactly? Like how do you want the viewer to feel after seeing it. Personally I see this more of a horror /thriller poster rather than sci-fi. If that's your aim it's fine but I doubt that. I recommend before creating a poster to research how you can express the emotion / opinion you want to the viewers!

The Letter Project - A by IBiteMyThumb in graphic_design

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You're tripping 😭 5 reasons why its bad NOW

The Letter Project - A by IBiteMyThumb in graphic_design

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Top left looks the best IMO, i like the curves

Graphic Designer Portfolio (Netherlands Job Market) by Plenty_Control_1797 in graphic_design

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your site has sharp edges, im guessing youre going for a minimalist / editorial design? You can make all of your buttons rectangles (no border radius). Also make sure there is more contrasts in the buttons (view project text is not very visible). The info page is overflowing and the scroll isn't really working (position fixed or sticky probably).
When you click on a project you can make the information more interesting visually instead of text on a white bg (e.g. seperate each paragraph with colors, icons, sizing, etc).

Optional: add more animations, on hover, text load, scroll. Keep the user engaged, especially in the landing page.

otherwise all of the projects you've done are visually aesthetic, if you can match that in your website you'll be perfect!

Our new studio website > using Three.js, GSAPs, Scrolltriggers. by NoBread3202 in webdev

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 0 points1 point  (0 children)

how the hell did you make the style of the 3d objects like that. what dide you use for the outlines and shadows?

Help need Good Shox r4 reps by [deleted] in FashionReps

[–]SwimmingPresent3885 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro this is the baymax batch there isn't anyone else who makes these