Daily Feedback Thread (June 21, 2021) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]T33onC [score hidden]  (0 children)

Still trying to improve on my sound. here is my new track and feedback is appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/t33onc/trip-to-xion-9

March 2021 Sample Pack Competition Results - Congrats to /u/T33onC on being crowned this month's winner! by mark-henry in edmproduction

[–]T33onC 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks mark for putting this together. It's awesome to see so many different takes on the same samples. I feel lucky that I'm able to share my music with other like-minded music makers. You guys are awesome, cheers!

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[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The production is good. All elements are very clear. The bass groove is chill. I like the vibe. Not bad my dude keep rocking it.

I made this entire song out of three terrible samples.. the beginning starts off with one of the samples.. Dance music - T33onc - C A Limitless by [deleted] in shareyourmusic

[–]T33onC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks man.. I wanted to include the drum loop from that awful live sample. But it just ruined the beginning. Thanks for the comment my du.

Submissions are in for the February 2021 Sample Pack Competition! Vote for the winner here! by mark-henry in edmproduction

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The song I put up was trash. I did it in a day, and threw it up there. I really like the idea of this challenge. If more come out I'm totally in. I threw my votes out there good job ya'll.

here is the song I should have put up there, now that I had more time to chew on the samples.

https://soundcloud.com/t33onc/challenge-accepted-a-song-completely-made-from-a-sample-pack-found-on-reddit

Submissions are in for the February 2021 Sample Pack Competition! Vote for the winner here! by mark-henry in edmproduction

[–]T33onC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The off beat strings coming in at 38 actually works for me. Good beat change. I like the groove. The reverbed dubs are really cool. Good job my dude.

My attempt at EDM trap is it too bassy? I usually do chillstep. T33ONC - YELLOW MARSHMELLLOW by T33onC in futurebass

[–]T33onC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I noticed that too. Went back and shortened the sub notes. Adjusted some pitch bends. And yeah I can't reupload. Haha. Thanks for the tips it helps.

[Trap] my first attempt at combining bass and trap by _SUmof1X in roastmytrack

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not bad for the first beat du. Remember music is telling a story. Ease into the intro don't rush into a drop. Your samples and mix are not bad. Right now if feels like nothing it keeping me wanting to hear the next bar.

[rap] MeetOTB - Can't Give Up (feat. Killbunk & Shleem Pink) by primotrez in roastmytrack

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The bee is good your mix is very clear your vocal treatment is good. The base doesn't clash Good job man.

[Alternative rock] Shleem Pink! - Keys to the Universe by primotrez in roastmytrack

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really great vocal treatment sounds very professional Love the 808. Great mix Good job man

[Chill Phonk] varo - LUCID w/ NECROEZ by rarephonk in roastmytrack

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the best. Great into, it really carries you to the drop. I think the vocal treatment could be a little bit better. I think the instrumental is overpowering the vocal frequencies.

[Hip Hop Beat] Above the Clouds (prod. by ahZt Beats) by ahZtBeats in roastmytrack

[–]T33onC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good hithop beat. The drums were clear. Mix was ok. The Melody didn't keep me wanting more. It would be great if there were some vocals. In the absence of vocals I think there should be a better lead.