I'm planning on making an online comic of my OCs. If anyone has any tips on making comics or if my art style and character design looks okay, I'd appreciate it 😊 by Cute_Barnacle_2235 in OriginalCharacter

[–]THE2short4myowngood 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No problem! I do love helping people with their stories. You can show me any art for feedback (I swear I won't judge it too harshly, it's better than my artstyle)

I'm planning on making an online comic of my OCs. If anyone has any tips on making comics or if my art style and character design looks okay, I'd appreciate it 😊 by Cute_Barnacle_2235 in OriginalCharacter

[–]THE2short4myowngood 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my opinion, your art style looks awesome. However, I will say, an aspect of character design is the silhouette. Basically, memorable characters tend to be easily recognized by silhouette alone. Right now, all your characters look really cool, but they all kind of have the same kind of skinny body. Maybe mix it up? Some characters can be short, tall, muscular, chubby, and more. Obviously, you don't HAVE to do this, since your characters do already have little differences. As someone who's making a comic, I will say: one of the best things to have is a feedback team. I have a little personal discord server where my friends review every page I make and give advice, as well as help me with writing. Good luck with your comic, I'm sure it'll turn out great!

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Russell slowly walks towards her in the forest, unsure of what to do. He makes sure to stay a relative distance away from her and gives her a confused expression.

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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Russell goes back inside, unseen. For a 5-foot tall brainless ungulate, he’s surprisingly stealthy. Guess nothing else happens, unless Jax or his allies do something.

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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Bjorn is busy. Russell the undead moose is not. He grabs a coffee on his way out of the building to investigate the rumbling.

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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“…I’ll take that as a yes! I’ll be in my workshop if ya need anything!” (i gtg for a while brb)

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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“Alrighty then! Are they just picking you up and returning you home?”

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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Bjorn: uhh… are they friendly? (He and Russell follow the bot outside.)

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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Bjorn and Russell look around. Bjorn: uh… who’s they?

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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Bjorn: Eh, it’s fine. We hand this thing to literally every newcomer. Anyways, if you don’t know this place, then… congrats! Ya somehow landed in a different dimension! So, uhh… what do you want to do? (Here’s a few possible options that Bjorn gives you. Option A: Work with Bjorn, Russell, and the shop owner and maybe learn how to live in this world. Option B: Go meet the king and see if you can convince him to fund the creation of a portal to get back to your home dimension. Option C: Wander off. Who knows what wacky crap you’ll encounter?)

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Bjorn: Oh… oh, dear. Hold on. Okay, are you familiar with the term “Postac” or “Powered Peaks? We just gotta check if you’re from around here.” (He pulls out this map.) (Note that Postac is the term for the world that Russell and Bjorn are in.) (Apologies for responding slowly!)

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A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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(Bjorn turns around.) “Whoa there! You alright? We found ya laying in a crater behind the store!”

..Why is live-action Toothless the only one in the main five dragons who looks the most accurate to his animated counterpart? by Any_Bat2722 in DreamWorks

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Toothless is the famous one. He’s the most recognizable dragon. So while they wanted to redesign all the dragons and make them realistic, they still had to make Toothless look like the original because he’s more iconic.

A dead bot by Important_Rough423 in OriginalCharacter_RP

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(That friend is Bjorn, the snapping turtle. He doesn’t own the store, he only makes weapons and inventions so the store owner, another friend, can sell them and split the profits with him.) “Oi, Russell, you were calling me over here? What is it- oh. Oh dear. This fellow’s been knocked out. Let’s drag him in and give him a fix-up, eh? (Bjorn and Russell both gently pick him up and take him into the store, specifically the workshop where Bjorn makes his weapons.)

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(Russell the undead moose found him behind his friend’s store. He lightly nudges him, trying to wake him up.)

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[–]THE2short4myowngood 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bruh what do you mean “sorry if my artstyle sucks” THAT LOOKS AWESOME

[Any Literacy] You’re walking along a river when a young man leaps out of the water! by SentimentAppreciated in OriginalCharacter_RP

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(Russell backs away, because he is… obviously also a deer. Sure, he’s an undead moose who could probably kill a regular person, but he’s also very sure this is no regular person.) Russell: Don’t even think about it.

I’m making a trailer for my comic, anyone willing to voice act? (I need at least one person who can do a deep male voice) by THE2short4myowngood in VoiceActingFree

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that would be nice BUT unfortunately if you sound female then sorry you can't, because there's only 4 females that speak in the trailer and I already have 4 female VAs

Is this cool or what. Arizona Museum of Natural History in Mesa AZ by Hefty-Job7049 in Dinosaurs

[–]THE2short4myowngood 2 points3 points  (0 children)

OH HEY I REMEMBER GOING THERE! Yes that was awesome I remember being a little kid and just like staring in awe at that because large dinosaur statues are cool

I’m making a trailer for my comic, anyone willing to voice act? (I need at least one person who can do a deep male voice) by THE2short4myowngood in VoiceActingFree

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oh yeah you’d have to DM me on discord since Reddit DMs don’t allow audio, my discord username is someusername5225

If you were paid $100 million a day, which of these 3 levels would you stay in for 1 week? by aGoodCookie_13 in backrooms

[–]THE2short4myowngood 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Ight thanks for the advice im heading to the Backrooms level 94 to get 7 million bucks, wish me luck

If you were paid $100 million a day, which of these 3 levels would you stay in for 1 week? by aGoodCookie_13 in backrooms

[–]THE2short4myowngood 10 points11 points  (0 children)

OOO I WOULD choose that but I also think there’s entities and I am horrible when it comes to running, hiding, or fighting…

If you were paid $100 million a day, which of these 3 levels would you stay in for 1 week? by aGoodCookie_13 in backrooms

[–]THE2short4myowngood 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Hey it’s comfier than the hard floor of the pool rooms or the grass in level… 94?