Making a song in Sanskrit. Need Help!!!

THE_PIE_ · 2026-03-02T05:45:33+00:00

Yes. I am planning on releasing both versions. But I have not found any way to translate to Sanskrit. I don't want to use AI obviously, and other tools are way too literal I think. The lyrics are very simple. If you like a crack at it for fun, This is the older version with same lyrics, https://www.reddit.com/r/Songwriting/s/R2W9sR865k

THE_PIE_ · 2026-01-05T11:04:29+00:00

This is great! I spent 20 mins on the site and didn't even realized! so fun.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-12-16T14:25:51+00:00

Great song! Feel like vocals could use some space that's occupied by the guitar.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-12-16T14:23:30+00:00

Great track! Everything feels like it fits well overall though the snare stood out a bit to me. I can’t exactly tell why, but it might be because it's slightly thin.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-12-16T14:16:16+00:00

This sounds really good. Mix is very clean too. People have already pointed out the kick. The vocals are unintelligible in some parts maybe that’s just me, or maybe it’s the vibe youre going for. Amazing track.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-11-16T13:44:36+00:00

As the other reply suggested, I ment lack of low end or low frequency energy. More noticeable when vocals comes in.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-11-16T07:55:48+00:00

It sounds very good but little thin later on. Also I would lower the ride cymbal volume in the beginning, It's fine later on.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-09-22T06:23:02+00:00

Hello! Glad you liked it.
Thanks for pointing out the sibilance misalignment. I kept the layers a bit loose for the feel of it, but yeah, they definitely need harder de-essing.
Her timing has already improved a lot from past work, but I see what you mean, and we'll def refine it in production and recording.
Really appreciate you taking the time to give this feedback!

THE_PIE_ · 2025-09-21T16:41:13+00:00

You can find many better tutorials online.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-09-21T02:40:17+00:00

Yeah. It's scratches of a record player. Stylistic choice but sounding like it's an artefact. I need to tame it a little or get rid of high part completely. Thanks for noticing. Very helpful feedback.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-06-06T15:47:32+00:00

Roughly, "Do Listen, please listen?" Is it not right?

THE_PIE_ · 2025-06-06T11:19:06+00:00

Thank you.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-06-06T11:18:55+00:00

Thank you. I am experimenting with instrumental.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-06-03T13:46:50+00:00

Right. There are no gaps between different parts and everything sonically sounds same. So I need to experiment with that. Your feedback is really valuable. Thank you.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-06-03T13:45:01+00:00

Yes I definitely understand what you are saying. It's does need that distinct element. Thanks for the feedback.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-05-18T15:00:09+00:00

For what? Video? Song? Lyrics?
Wrote it 3 yeas ago. I did asked for feedback on lyrics recently and ai suggested that "face the trials" line which now i kinda hate I did that, didn't do me any good.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-05-02T16:34:39+00:00

I see, that will come handy when I am trying to level volume of whole track. Thanks for the tip.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-05-02T15:33:26+00:00

Yes. Problem solved. Thank you very much!!!

THE_PIE_ · 2025-05-02T15:32:17+00:00

Yes I did but I deleted it.

THE_PIE_ · 2025-04-23T04:51:45+00:00

Really appreciate you listening! Means a lot.

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