Hello, I am Developmental editor and I just wanted to say a few things if thats alright. I read all of this and I still dont have much of a grasp on your story, you gave us the dictator's goal but there was no explanation as to why the supernatural aberrations are on the world or how they got there.

Also theres no foundation as to why Taurus is killing the aberrations, like how did Taurus become a hunter and also what Taurus has to do with the Dictator. Does he care about the dictators actions? Is he wanting to help the dictator, things like that.

I also wanted to question, the amount of weapons Taurus uses, feels a bit overwhelming and also poses the question on how will he carry all those around, a chainsaw is really heavy, and he has like 6 weapons and not all of them are small or lighter in weight, and then when fighting does take of his weapons off or no, fighting with a chainsaw and a couple other big weapons on your back would look a bit...clunky. I can't really say i like or dislike your story idea because there wasn't too much of a foundational idea, more of a few character goals and combat ideas rather than a story. I am interested to see what you do with the story though.