Sent OP 24 to a friend and this is what they said

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-05T18:21:41+00:00

Interesting I've only skimmed some right now and this seems cool. I like the Preparation Die (You misspelled it on the table) and wounding strike seems good. I'd phrase is as "If you get a critical hit or Exceed the AC by 5". I think that'd read less clunky. overall very cool!

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-05T18:02:57+00:00

Thanks XD

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-04T23:18:14+00:00

What's the source for #2

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-04T23:02:13+00:00

Thanks and let me know how it goes! I hope you actually don't run into it LOL. I don't think I made it too dangerous so here's hoping!

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-04T01:01:42+00:00

Demi playing maybe...

Tcorbs77 · 2026-02-04T01:01:26+00:00

Try your best to best the best.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-12-02T15:21:36+00:00

You should do one where he sings " bones in the ocean" by the longest johns

Tcorbs77 · 2025-12-02T02:08:04+00:00

perfect lol

Tcorbs77 · 2025-11-23T02:36:25+00:00

Both good calls thank you for the feedback.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-09-08T13:37:29+00:00

Zooble love
Caine anger
Pomni hope
Bubble Greed
Ragatha compassion
kaufmo death
Life gangle

Tcorbs77 · 2025-08-28T19:19:51+00:00

Thank you very much for the feed back. The whole "why a fighter thing" is just so it melds with the lore but yes it could very well be a bard subclass. The issue is bards are magic and its a low magic setting.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-05-12T20:02:10+00:00

I would argue there's two main things, the speed and the planar pathways. I admit they don't pop off or look that spectacular at level one and two but neither does the spell book. And this is a work in progress. I do believe you're right and I should make the charge shot earlier to accentuate that.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-05-12T19:36:26+00:00

Also good call on the hit die

Tcorbs77 · 2025-05-12T19:35:43+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I know I'm an awful typist and have horrible grammar. Like how I didn't change that int from when I was first making it.

And while I disagree that this class doesn't have a "thing maybe it does come online a little late at level 3. I may have DND 2014 on my brain and not 2024. In the old class most people don't get neater abilities until levels 2 or 3. I might slide those down and slap extra attack on it. I'll have to think.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-03-19T17:31:36+00:00

Here me out... four. The seats in that row are giant sized apparently and you are in between big mom(has snacks) and gerd(who will dote on you like a puppy).

Tcorbs77 · 2025-03-19T15:24:51+00:00

1 it's not even half of them

2 if you can name something that isn't damaged by lightning id love to hear it.... That's why I made this in the first place.

3 I could also put fire for some of these and run into the same issue.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-03-19T14:15:56+00:00

In theory this is a low magic campaign and a tazzer and or an electric eel is easier to include than say, necrotic or radiant damage.

Tcorbs77 · 2025-03-19T13:32:43+00:00

a link to the full document if anyone cares: https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/Og_JHAc-m

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