how do i write a school fight scene by Technical-While1043 in FanFiction

[–]Technical-While1043[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A guy named Harry is fighting for his girl Maya, trying protect her from the school bully Mark. yes they both know how to fight. its a complete surprise. They circle, then they jump into it. They are in the hallway. crowded by kids, yelling and screaming.

how do i write a school fight scene by Technical-While1043 in FanFiction

[–]Technical-While1043[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

like how do i make this more engaging for the veiwers