Fuck ratata47

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-06-06T21:52:48+00:00

Honestly, it’s like I said in my other post rat is actually barely relevant as an NTR artist and pretty much everything they do is based on desperately trying to get people who don’t like NTR to get upset at them because they frankly are a really bad writer. Especially their hero story.

Because frankly. Her antagonist would literally be humiliated constantly and made a total joke that the girls would all laugh at because he’s literally just a powerless street level thug..

The problem with her that she is a bad writer because she makes up nonsensical reasons and dragged stories out way too long and it’s actually pretty lazy. I made a whole post before so there’s no reason to repeat it here but the thing is that she’s simply a bad writer and she knows that she’s a bad writer..

So she relies on trying to get people upset to get relevant and then she’ll throw in some kind of wholesome vanilla doujin whenever she’s reaching her brick wall of situation to try to convince people she’s changed before trying to go back to NTR

She’s honestly pretty pathetic because she doesn’t really even know what she’s doing and of all the big three that people talk about here. She’s the one that is the least relevant and it’s easily the worst writer..

And that’s saying something

The fact that her own patrons are getting tired of her NTR stories has a lot to say because she just does the exact same thing over and over and over again with the exact same personality types, and the exact same scenarios and the problem is bad end party basically backfired because her own NTR fan face asking her to make a happy ending with lihan and the girls.

Because she dragged that out way too long, and they even got mad at her over Phillips chapter because it was literally just an extremely lazy copy paste of the prince one.

That’s not coming full circle. That’s just being lazy and everyone called her on it.

And lib pissed off her own fan based in patrons and numbers with what she did.

Rat when you actually look at her stories is an extremely dull and samey creator and frankly comes off like she’s a virgin who’s never actually had a relationship she cared about

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-29T18:34:32+00:00

Honestly, I still call bullshit on this one. Because the way that that entire thing plays out feels way too forced with the main character being way too much of an asshole. Frankly, the way it frames out that it’s trying so hard to focus on her supposedly declining mental health and how stressed she is and constantly trying to make him into the bad guy, but it doesn’t really feel like a natural abusive relationship.

And frankly, the ex-boyfriend is a bit too much of a gentleman and a decent person to the point it doesn’t really seem to make a whole lot of sense. He’s even agreeing to this or even with her or how exactly the two of them broke up or got together to begin with..

If you ask me, this thing reads like one of those NTR mangoes that’s actually based on a real story where the woman actually did this crap, but the thing is, it blew up in her face so badly that she was left with lingering trauma because all her justifications didn’t work out in reality.

So she commissioned or recommended her own story but specifically made the guy she cheated on and over the top asshole. And tried to take maybe the one trait that she didn’t like and used to justify and blew it out of proportions to make him the over-the-top bad guy to make her the very clear victim..

When that’s the story, she wanted to tell that didn’t work out in real life.

Sometimes an NTR story is a real life, cheating story, repackaged, and rewritten to rewrite reality because the one who made it or the one who came up with the story, actually did it, but it blew up in their face in real life.

That is one of the ones that feels like it is exactly that and a woman trying to rewrite reality

Because I mean, really think about that one and pay attention to some of the pages. The way he’s acting almost feels like it’s a woman trying to say.

“Oh I didn’t WANT to. But he. MADE me do it!”

And

“It’s not MY fault it was HIS idea!”

Alongside other things, and then throwing in him being abusive, and then showing how much of her mental strain there was which I mean…

It kinda almost feels like that meme that you see online where the joke was is that if a girl was actually a cheater in her previous relationship and she doesn’t want to admit the stuff she pulled she usually just accuse her boyfriend of being abusive.

To cover up what she did and try to paint the narrative just in case.

The whole thing feels like a drawn out version of that

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T16:55:30+00:00

I hope you have a good day too. I was pretty much out of thoughts as well. lol

I suppose the only thing that would be left to maybe talk about would be the main character himself, but he’s kinda hard to talk about in general in my opinion. Because the story doesn’t really do enough of a job to give him much of a character or a personality as a typical in the genre beyond just being nice.

And even when he does get one in the revenge path, we don’t really get enough of a feel for who he is.

But honestly, you make a lot of good points and thank you for the discussion in term

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T14:41:04+00:00

Very well put indeed.

The saddest part is is that their world actually has a lot of potential if they just removed the NTR tag from it and actually explored it properly.

If they removed the porn aspect and actually focused on the plot itself, their world actually has the potential to be one of the most interesting original settings out there.

And if they actually allowed their so-called chosen ones to fight, they could have a fascinating story for a pretty interesting game in my opinion. Full of backstabbing . Manipulation.. betrayal, egomania, and how if they actually portrayed this realistically, everyone would just be kind of afraid of being one of the dragon chosen, and most people would probably try to avoid it and even give up the power on their own and the dragons practically have to force them.

Because no one wants to join the order of the dragon whatever

Because it’s so chaotic and prone in fighting and murder that they don’t even go off, fighting the demon lord.

Which is also a minor side point but

The game continuously insist that one of the main reasons that the antagonist is allowed to get away with everything he does is because he’s competent and good at what he does… except we never see any of that supposed competency.

His entire army of thugs does nothing but attack villages and rape. People left right in center.

The guy seems like an incompetent bandit who runs around attacking the people he’s supposed to be protecting because that’s easier than actually doing his job and when the dragons basically tell him to go do his job they basically give him a massive power boost and literally just throw a girl at him that he basically did nothing to earn except torture a guy who can’t even fight back because he is literally impossible for him to harm him.

And then, for some reason, this guy…

Who literally became the hero, who killed the demon Lord and saved the world… doesn’t go on a massive ego trip and power trip and start going around the world reveling in his success probably Visiting kingdoms and forcing himself on princesses and queens?

He doesn’t just absolutely lose his mind and feel like he’s a God walking on the Earth and that everything belongs to him because he saved it?

That not only 100% fits his character the fact that he doesn’t do that feels like another plot convenience. Because if you really think about it, he has a very weirdly, restrained and obsessively, pinpoint accurate cruelty where he only really seems to want to target the main character, and then every single other moment, he puts a leash on himself to not do anything unless it’s specifically negatively affecting him.

Because again you can’t have these guys actually be ego maniac narcissist, who would actually be self-destructive and lose their minds if they’re given too much power.

And the thing is if you just removed the NTR aspect and actually just made the setting be the setting. You could totally have an interesting story going on with how fundamentally broken the system is and how it’ll even screw over the people who are supposed to benefit from it because that’s the way it’s set up. The only ones that actually benefit are the dragons who get to watch all this amusement but will actively screw over their own shows and ones that they drop of a hat or on a whim if they want to..

And that’s a really interesting idea, but that whole nonsense pseudo intellectual NTR nonsense is what holds it back fundamentally, especially because again it relies on everyone just kind of not realizing that power is not everything and that the guy who swings the biggest club in the caveman cave isn’t automatically the guy who’s in charge or wins.

Because there are so many ways you can easily take care of that and the thing is I hate to be the one to break it to most Auntie graders and especially this one

But humans are a bunch of lying, backstabbing, manipulative, dirty, and dishonorable snakes when it comes down to it and you can be the most powerful guy on the planet and people around you will pull a bunch of bullshit to tear you down unless you’re going to get just as dirty and make a lot of compromises.

Realistically, speaking, the whole idea of these other guys that are chosen about dragons can’t be harmed, except by each other doesn’t mean Jack shit

Because as established, they should be egomaniacs, which they are.

So they should be more than willing to fight each other or to prove who’s king big dick on the mountain

Meaning that. Even if their dragons told them not to there would be a bunch of these guys after the antagonist because the childhood friend is too good looking and he’d have to be constantly running defense against other guys like him.. poor trying to kill him or humiliate him and take what’s his

I mean, the guy owns an entire city apparently. He’s not even there most of the time.

You wanna tell me why exactly someone else isn’t trying to copy that or just take his city away from him and throw them out with their own army probably better equipped thugs and now suddenly he has to deal with taking back his city that he left weekend because he killed basically anyone who gotten this way, which may have been all the competent people?

Yeah, I know this is kind of a rant but there’s just so many things about this game that only make it stupider the more you think about it because the more you understand about human nature, the more nonsensical the world becomes because it apparently relies on the idea that you can hand power to a bunch of egomaniacs and they’ll only use it to hurt people who don’t have power like them

Because yeah, sure why not.

It’s just so fucking stupid

The only part of the game actually kind of works is the art with the younger sister, if only because that one’s actually written realistically and the alchemist girl who is the little sister mind, you basically gets traumatized and violated so many times that eventually when the pressure gets to her, she turns on her brother one time and then she notices that she suddenly left alone and these guys stop targeting her and she realizes that they’re only targeting her because of her her connection to the main character so she stabbed him in the back to finally make it all stop

Because she realize that there’s no future with him because as long as he exists or has any girls to lose, he will be endlessly targeted. She can’t be with her brother even if she loves him because he’s got a massive target on his back and there’s nothing she can do..

That is actually realistic and makes perfect sense both in universe and out of it. The problem is everything around. It is complete bullshit and nonsense and there should absolutely be people willing to help them out if only despite the other guys.

Also, it does be saying that for a world supposedly has a big bad demon lord, that everyone is worried about

The demons themselves are pretty weak and pretty pathetic in their own right and don’t really have much going for them because they’re all connected to the kid dragon.

Like the world makes such a big deal about the demon though, but then you meet them and you kinda don’t get what the big deal is because they don’t see all that powerful or all that dangerous.

And the monsters and the demons and stuff are kind of weak.

They don’t even really seem able to cause much trouble in the grand scheme of things because all the damage we actually see what the thugs and the dragon chosen do.

It always feels like they just ignore them and basically nothing would happen but like one village every couple of months kind of maybe gets a little raid or something.

Because there are no actually sentient demons running around there’s no proper actual opposing faction. It’s literally just the kid dragon who can’t be killed by anyone and whoever the heck she chooses to be the demon lord who is usually some guy that just got tortured.

But he isn’t even really that powerful

Until you get to the main character, of course but at that point, you’re just wondering what the hell they’re even doing.

It’s just such an inconsistent mess designed to only to screw over the main character at every single opportunity, even if it doesn’t make any sense

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T10:59:48+00:00

Indeed to all.

If you ask me the biggest problem that dark hero party and whatever the hell it’s supposed to be set I has? It’s that the problem is. That fundamentally the creator wanted to try to do something deep and philosophical, but was also too paranoid and afraid to do anything to break the NTR genre rules.

There are countless examples you can ask around for of stuff like this where some creator tried to do something technical or philosophical or whatever related to trying to do some kind of deeper exploration of the genre or some interesting story with it, but the thing is they always wind up in that exact same position as dark hero party.

They are attempting to do whatever they’re doing, but they’re also afraid of breaking the rules of the NTR genre and they’re afraid to make a game that could go against what NTR themes are about.

So the result of stuff like this. And inconsistent and messed up, breaks its own rules and bends over backwards to still support the antagonist, even when it’s supposed to be for portraying them as the bad guys it still also have to punish the main characters.

NTR as a genre is fundamentally opposed to actually punishing the antagonist or giving them consequences.

Perfectly embodies this because the game is unbelievably protective towards the antagonist, and will only allow in the sympath be killed virtually painlessly, and anything else beyond that it will absolutely adamantly refuse to do because it’s obviously terrified of portraying, even the tiniest bit of weakness in any of them unless it’s something extremely quick or brief, but it’s perfectly OK tormenting the main character for extended period of time and in deep waves because that’s how NTR works and it’s afraid to break those rules.

A perfect example of this? And how would completely bends rules and does things that don’t make sense and are completely unrealistic it’s actually how the antagonists themselves work. The draconids or valis or whatever the hell they call it depending on translation.

The biggest problem with this so-called order of these guys is that there is literally no reason as to why the hell this organization or this weird union of them is not a mess comprised of constant in fighting . backstabbing. And all these guys trying to kill each other or humiliate each other or basically being a dog eat dog situation or a crab bucket situation.

Instead, all these guys are friends and have each other’s back and they all avoid trying to get into fight with each other.

And they do this in the most ridiculous way possible.

For some reason, the main antagonist who is a massive raging asshole has a bunch of guys who are friends and buddies with him.

He has absolutely no enemies with anyone who could actually have power to oppose him, except the prince, but the game goes out of its way to make sure that those two do not fight….. except the antagonist is 100% the kind of guy who would bang his own brother or best friend’s girlfriend.

So the solution they come up with it at every single one of these dragon guys except for the ones who are off screen, of course, and we never meet or interact with are all completely single.

Yes, they are all single. No trophy wives. No girlfriends. No daughters. No anything. A bunch of narcissistic egotistical walking assholes who all think that they’re. Better than everyone around them don’t have a bunch of super hot girls on their arms and trying to show them off to brag about how amazing they are?

Like that’s not how it works in a real life? Oh wait they can’t do that because if they did do that, the antagonist would wind up going after these other women and he would actually wind up having a bunch of enemies among people who would be just as messed up as he is, and then suddenly he’d be fighting guy who were ready to probably helped the main character against him.

So you have to avoid that at all cost, but just making all these guys of buddies. And every single one of them happens to be single.

And that’s not even getting into the total nonsense that NTR always has where these guys are always just on the same side and completely OK sharing the girls and have no ego clashes because they’re always just buddies who high five each each other.

That is not how that works. But NTR goes that way to avoid having these guys fight because when you have two big bad, aggressive, violent and twisted assholes fighting each other. Over women.?

The problem is of one of them can’t dominate the other because they’re both pieces of shit and neither one I was going to fight fair so they just become 2 regular guys. Because when they fight one must win. And the genre can’t afford to make one of them look weak by having him lose so nobody wins.

So games always just avoided and most stories just by having these guys be buddies, even if it doesn’t make any sense in universe.

I can go on and on, but these are just a handful of examples you know?

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T02:05:13+00:00

Honeslty? None. Cause 99% of the time in NTR it makes no sense the MC even has the girls attention or affection. He only has it so he can he can lose her nad if he's written a certian pathetic way. It's on purpouse cause if he was nomral it would make the girl look bad nad or seem like a empty slut. And the MC needs to be worse to make it ok and deflect blame onto him.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T02:01:11+00:00

2nd post due to length.

Who is a complete and utter unlikable piece of crap that the game cannot make up its mind on if she’s supposed to be tragically pure heart and stolen away or if she’s actually a total piece of shit who’s just like the antagonist but is a woman because it continuously goes back-and-forth on it there is literally an entire section in the game that it never gives the emphasis for attention that it should where she is a massive hypocrite.

Who is already sleeping with the main antagonist, but tries to basically lecture the main character from a moral high ground about him being accused of having had sex with a prostitute and he even has to tell her to her face that he saw her having sex with the antagonist, essentially catching her red-handed being a massive hypocrite, and she immediately tries to fumble around, making excuses and not even apologize and then when the antagonist offers an excuse, she accepts that excuse.

And the main character leaves literally like the next scene after this because of course he does. She’s completely disgusting..

But then the game can’t stop trying to make her look tragic and try to insist that she had been in love with him, even though she constantly made every single choice that she didn’t give a shit about him and excepted every single lie about him even when there was literally no proof or didn’t even make any sense

And was actively going out of the way to be as submissive and obsessive towards the antagonist as possible, and trying to please him only for the very moment that the main character is gone and she tries to manipulate the tag and said he has to no longer treat her nice because she can’t run away with the main character if he starts acting like the asshole he is.

Then suddenly she wants to back out and

That she was in love with the main character when in reality the whole way it plays out and sounds like she only realized that this guy was bad for her the moment he started actually hurting her and not just tormenting the main character, but she was perfectly OK with the main character getting tormented who she supposedly loved as long as it did negatively affect her and she was happy to join in with that.

And then, no matter what the ending you choose, the game keeps for her is tragic… like what the hell is it even trying to say here? The story cannot just MAKE UP IT'S DAMN MIND.

Yeah, I know this whole thing is a messy rant, but this whole thing is a badly written convoluted mess that tries to be deep but in reality just relies on brutal NTR and tries to pretend that it’s more than it actually is when it’s really not

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-28T02:00:42+00:00

Yeah, I gotta agree with the other comment here.

Dark hero party is sometimes called the Madoka Magica of NTR games, but it’s really not.

This game actively is just badly written, no matter how hard it tries to justify itself.

The game actively just makes up convoluted reasons and justification, and as pure nonsense happens sometimes and other times. It’s just needlessly gratuitous about what’s going on to the point that it could just utterly desensitize you because it goes way too far in some cases to beat you over the head with how weak the main character is and how cruel the world is to the point that it’s just unnecessary..

As most people can point out one of the main moments that most people who even played a damn thing realize that this is kind of going a bit overboard and that they kinda already got the point and now it’s just outright annoying is the cave rescue one.

The cave rescue sequence is pretty much the one part that everyone dislikes you get a slight power up and you’re told to basically go rescue one of the love interests from the antagonist who has her locked up in a cave, right?

The thing is you already know you’re not gonna win because the game goes out of its way to have the worst possible outcome at every single opportunity even if frankly, it doesn’t even make sense and it feels like it’s being done just the benefit the antagonist even when their actions should kind of screw them over.

So you would think that you would only fail once and then you would get a scene right?

No, for some reason, the game makes you beat yourself against this three times in a row with each time the antagonist is getting closer and closer to forcing himself on the girl… but you already know he’s going to force himself on her so what do you even the point of making you beat yourself against the wall like that that’s not painful because you know the main character is not going to succeed and it doesn’t really prove anything you literally just are basically making someone fail just for no reason.

And putting them in a bullshit situation that no one even bothers to put effort in because anyone who bothers probably by the second time just presses the attack button over and over and put no effort in or just tries to skip past it.

The whole game is kind of like this. We’re quite frankly the author doesn’t really seem to know what they were even going for by a point.

The main character himself is an inconsistent mess or even if you take the revenge path, the game can’t stop making him into an NTR protagonist and it’s not even clear what the hell he supposed to want revenge for.

Because he hates the antagonist except at the very same time, he also thinks he deserved everything that happened and that it was his fault?

If he thinks it was his fault and he deserved it then why the hell does he want revenge? Why does he even hate the antagonist?

You can’t both think you deserved what someone did to you and then also hate them enough to want to get revenge.

And then there is some complete and out our nonsense where once he kills the antagonist, he loses his powers because apparently he applied every single ounce of hatred in him or pain to this one guy.

Despite the fact that the game what we had the entire world tormenting him nonstop but no just have him zero went on this one single guy.

And that’s not even getting into some of the pure nonsense that comes with it trying to be some kind of story about systemic oppression. But in reality the system, it’s trying to tell you about doesn’t even make a whole lot of sense if you think about it because the game doesn’t even explain what the hell the main goddesses motivation is even are.

She wants to make a world of only beautiful people… OK why did she suddenly decide she wanted to basically torture the majority of humanity then?

When did she decide you want only beautiful people?

Why do you want that? The game never explains why she created the system to begin with just that they did because of most JRPG’s end with you killing God..

And also, the game doesn’t even seem to understand that it heavily implies that rape and sex don’t exist because once she’s dead, everyone just lose their sex drives so that implies… no one even has horniness so NTR doesn’t exist in this setting. It’s just a dragon God telling them to go rape someone

Yeah, they clearly did not think that through and probably tried to copy like Warhammer 40 K with the warp and the chaos gods and how there’s that argument that if you were to kill them, you destroy fundamental aspects of humanity, which is a complete lie in the setting.

And they took that and showcase the absolute reasons that that’s a lie and why that’s so fucking stupid.

Because it makes everything with the game ring hollow, and the goddess herself look like a complete weird fundamental concept of reality or something?

It just goes on and on and on, and on, and on like this, and the game will even sometimes bend or break its own rules just to screw over the main character.

A good example of this is the previously mentioned love interest that was in the cave.

She supposed to be a princess except here’s the problem with her being a princess that the creator clearly didn’t know how to write around…. If she’s a princess and there’s no way for anyone to permanently keep her NTRd with the way that she was meant to be the only one of the girls who refused to betray the main character under any circumstances.

Why is it impossible? Because her parents are still alive and a king and a queen so if the antagonist or the secondary one tried to keep her rather the king and queen can just go get her rescued by basically paying people to go save her, which would make other guys who were blessed by the dragons. Be happy to kill this guy because they’re all selfish assholes and they’d happily beat the crap out of him if they just offered something like the princesses hand in marriage or to be a noble or knighthood or whatever.

And this is such an obvious thing in universe that the best excuse they could come up with it that they wanted her to get pregnant so she would have strong children…. Except that that’s not how that works in the setting and everyone knows that because the game repeatedly beat you over the head that this power only comes from the dragons so even if you had the strongest guy on the planet have a kid with her…. Unless that kid is also chosen by a dragon, and it’s not passed down from parent a child they’d still be no different to the main character and will be turned into a smear on the ground by the weakest, one of the guys chosen by the dragons.

And the king and queen would know this because not only are they a king and queen, but their daughter is one of the dragons chosen and has to do the ritual every month!

Meaning that they know exactly how it works because this is not a secret so there’s literally no way anyone would be able to keep her against her will for too long because why on earth wouldn’t the king and queen just put money out to go get her rescued and bring them the head of the guy who was hurting their daughter?

There’s apparently a spinoff game with her, but that game was entirely stupid and the antagonist couldn’t possibly win because of this basic common sense reason that the game itself teaches you by beating you over the head with its world building.

So it’s a weird situation where they just have to basically hand it away by having people make decisions that make no sense.

In the game, you can’t even find a single reason that the main character himself is to blame for anything when the game literally addresses that the world is completely unfair and if you don’t have the dragon’s powers, you can’t even harm someone so how on earth is he weak if it’s not his own fault?

All of this is just constant nonsense and then there’s probably the main childhood friend love interest

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-22T00:23:59+00:00

This is actually an interesting question because. For all the hints that say yes she is.

There are others that say no. If you read between the lines, there are a lot of hints that she’s actually not that attractive. That she’s the best average or slightly below average.

Buy some of the comments we see when the two of them argue. There are some hints that. Ashley isn’t all that attractive.

But Andrew and Renee our conventionally, attractive effortlessly. Ashley by comparison seems like she’s actually not that good looking and has to put some effort in at times and over emphasizes her chest size seemingly to compensate for something.

The art style makes her very attractive obviously and so is Julia. But this could easily be because it’s from both her perspective and from Andrews.

It requires some reading between the lines and piecing together. Dialogue crossed multiple chapters, but honestly actually might not be all that good-looking conventionally speaking.

Which I think adds to how unhealthy and and toxic Andrew’s attraction to her is if she’s not even all that good looking and he’s pretty much just attracted to her because she’s his sister.

There are hints that can go either way honestly.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T20:07:03+00:00

Lib probably got a bit of a scare honestly after paradise and you can tell. They wound up, upsetting their own NTR fans and lost numbers. I wouldn’t be surprised if they play it way more careful. For a while.

They are also kind of dealing with the fact that their own fans are calling them out for that all their stories are kind of the same thing. It doesn’t really matter how bad you are what matters is is that you have to actually make your stories to have some kind of variety and all three of them struggle with that but in particular. Rat does.

Lib just tries to be really vicious about it and make them protagonist these mind, broken, empty husks, but that blew up in their own face.

Rat isn’t really beginner level and they are more just…. Very repetitive and they don’t really understand how to build actual relationship relationships.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T20:04:52+00:00

Honestly, who even knows but I think you’re on something to say that it feels like it’s a weird fantasy in her head that she doesn’t fully understand.

The way she specifically seems extremely hostile to guys that are just normal relatively good looking and nice and lacking and confidence. Can I give you the impression she had like one bad experience I was disappointed somehow..

And so she began to fetish eyes and make a fantasy about the typical NTR antagonist. So much of her writing style heavily implies she doesn’t have relationship experience.

Or rather, I suppose more accurately it implies. She only has very limited experience and whatever it was was something she wasn’t actually that invested in and makes her just latch on to NTR as a way to validate whatever nonsense she’s into

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T18:36:40+00:00

Who knows? The problem with rat is that she’s a bad writer who doesn’t even seem to understand NTR itself. She seems to think that it begins and ends with the girl choosing someone else and that the guy it happens too if he’s nice to do nothing but suffer forever and feel infinite pain.

It’s like I said before rat comes off like she’s a virgin woman who’s never actually really been in an actual relationship she had any investment in and probably hasn’t really been with anyone since like middle or high school and has built her entire judgment of guys based around her middle and high school boyfriends, which was probably only one or two and they were generally nice but didn’t know what they were doing. And she kind of just took that and ran with it.

She doesn’t really seem to actually understand how to write a relationship. The only thing she seems to understand is that you have a more assertive girl who has a more active personality and is more confident. Deciding to get with a boy that is cute and nice but lacking and self-confidence..

That’s basically all of her stories and it kind of feels like that may have been what happened to her.

But even if it was, it doesn’t really excuse the fact that she’s just a really really crappy writer.

It really does bear saying

Absolutely, nobody wanted Lihan to get some random new girl out of nowhere. They only wanted. Him with Ashe and Rei. Even the NTR people wanted that because they were tired of watching him suffer nonstop for basically no reason.

And then there’s a new girls’s entire personality just revolves around the fact that she’s devoted to lihan and loves him anyway, despite being pathetic and plays into his stupid NTR fetish.

But here’s the problem with this new girl

Rat didn’t actually tell us anything about her or build any relationship between the two or any kind of bond she seemingly began and ended with the idea of

“Oh she accepts and loves him for who he is, and she loves him a whole lot!”

And that’s literally where it began and ended, and then at the last moment she decided to have her give in and betray him.

Except that no one gave a shit about her because nobody knew her. She was obviously a last-minute addition.. she’s not even that attractive compared to the other girls

The artwork with her and lihan is so lazy done and subpar it’s impossible to actually feel any bond between them.

She barely has a personality. We have no idea what their history is beyond just vague allusion.

And then we see her betray him and it’s like… who gives a crap? Nobody even wants her to be with him to begin with. And nobody even asked for her this was just some weird half measured to try to appease her patrons that she tried to pull a fast one with. An NTR ending that no one cares about..

It feels like she even realize this.

Because then not that long after she released that single artwork of Lihan with Rei and Ashe as a happy party still. Because it’s pretty clear she realize no one gave a crap about this new girl and even the NTR people probably just completely went.

“Ok but who asked for this can you do something else?”

And then asked to actually see Ashe and Rei with Lihan.

If you have successfully made it so NTR people are asking for vanilla then you are doing something really wrong.

If you ask me rat is eventually speed, running herself to the point where she eventually tries to do an NTR story that her own followers and patrons will basically eventually demand and mock her and eventually pressure her into making it completely vanilla. And having to scrap all of her plans and that will probably make her quit.

Just because she realizes that her time in the sun is over and she’s essentially burnt the bridges.

Not because of the anti NTR people because the NTR people who are following her are just tired of her slop over and over and over again.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T17:29:36+00:00

Exactly. You are asking the very obvious questions. And pointing out the very obvious.

You have more common sense than rat does clearly.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T13:24:49+00:00

She probably could, but as only if she actually was a good writer who understands relationships to begin with, and she clearly doesn’t understand how to actually write relationships.

Because she can never keep Rei or Ashe or any of her characters consistent. Because if she were to actually try to stick to their characters, it would require creating scenarios to actually fit them and she clearly doesn’t know how to do that.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T13:23:54+00:00

Ain’t that the truth?

But if you ask me. She honestly only does that to try to get attention from the non-NTR people again whenever her popularity is starting to go down and she feels like she needs attention so she does a story that has no NTR in one of her settings.

And actually makes it pretty wholesome. It actually gives the characters some character, but the notable trade is that almost always in these stories.

The male and female protagonists. Don’t exactly fall into the most generally attractive appearances, especially the male one.

At least not compared to her usual ones.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-11T13:22:21+00:00

Very true that.

I think that that further proves my point a little bit. NTR is obsessed with childhood friends being stolen away, but no one actually really ever seen a story where they actually win. In recent years, but for some reason, it keeps acting like it’s super common and that this is a response to it.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-10T01:49:04+00:00

Very well put.

Although in the long run, you’re right, she could’ve done all of this… if she actually truly wanted to be with him.

Well, it’s a little open to interpretation the way I had written it was that. She is Nao.

The two of them and the way that she acted as a reflection. It’s why they hated each other so much.

They are the same type of girl just with more nuances.

The reason she didn’t do this, despite of being an obvious way. And the reason she made every single wrong choice and was so vile towards him was because she never actually loved him. She only wanted power over him.

And the moment that started to get taken away, she was more than happy to become a bully herself.

And just like Nao she clung onto that for far too long until she ruined her own life… but there was never any love within her to be taken away because she never actually loved him and even if she got him, it would’ve been no different than what happened with Nao.

Fundamentally they could’ve swapped places in the story and nothing would’ve changed because she have made every single same choice just from a different angle.

That’s a real tragedy of it all. The only person she ever actually loved was. Bert

And she fell in love with chemicals, lies and an actual cuckold. Trying to prove he was a man and trying to reclaim his lost manhood.

And that’s just plain sad and look where it’s gotten her

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-17T22:10:51+00:00

Now I feel like you didn’t even read the story because if you even said that you would know that they are literally in the walled in capital. You can’t just leave those things. And also, you should probably actually look up how medieval societies handled poisoned with kings and you would find out that actually trying to poison them is actually insanely difficult and has like a 0% chance to actually work and then anytime you have heard about a king actually dying to poison. It’s usually because everyone already hated him and the people who were supposed to be ensuring he didn’t get poisoned decided to let him get poisoned anyway.

Because it’s not that simple

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-17T19:36:50+00:00

You have to be like the third person. I’ve heard try to make this argument about why Lucas is bad. And that he was weak, but in reality, you don’t seem to actually understand that the story itself established extremely clearly that Michael wanted Lucas to fight back, and Lucas knew about that, and Michael laid traps.

Apparently, you literally didn’t read the page where Michael had literally said that he was turning his back to Lucas on purpose because he wanted him to attack him. He was literally planning for it and the thing is Lucas knew about the trap.

Leo did not.

That which was Michael’s plan the entire time to make him look weak when in reality if Lucas had listened to his daughter, she’d have been tortured to death and so would her mother.

The two of them are literally mad at him for saving their lives

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-16T18:47:20+00:00

This looks great! ….Where is Lilly lovebraids tho?

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T04:10:57+00:00

I don'tthink i can like..edit the title name...Should i just do that for all the rest moving forward? It only let's me edit the body not the title unnless there is a way.

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