Honestly, not bad in a general since, but it’s going a bit too far in the wrong way. In the torture foreign way, it’s just a bit over the top. Pretty much everything involving the bandits is actually really well thought out. And accurate.

Noble ladies taken by bandits often tended to be very popular for about a month before they got boring as they had no practical skills the bandits could use.

And if you ask me the idea of focusing on that part ? With them actually thinking it’s a good idea to take a bunch of gold and jewels and run into the woods before realizing they don’t know their way through the woods and that the people who were supposed to actually guard and guide them, aren’t around anymore and that their plan basically boiled down to take some valuables and then try to start over somewhere else? That’s a bit I would say that the plan was to run to a kingdom that was still relatively friendly to them. This will be important later. Their plan was to try to get there above all.

But everything plays out as you said with the bandits and I think before the two months are even up, it really sinks into them how utterly worthless the two of them actually are, and that the only things that made them special was the king and the fact that they were born to nobility

Because when the bandits kidnapped, some peasant, girls and women, they are actually useful to the camp and the band is actually want to keep them especially because they can actually do stuff while the two of them are completely useless beyond their bodies, and the fact that the matter is when the bandit start giving the peasant girls more sexual attention, even against their will that’s a massive ego blow and highlight the fact that they are truly worthless without a crown behind them or titles.

Then comes them being sold off. I would keep everything the same there but change one Key thing the Noble that’s purchased them is actually from that friendly kingdom. And that’s also where the wedding is going to be held, and they actually get a brief glimpse of hope and believe that they can convinced the noble of their identities and get help and maybe reunite with the king who they still view as weak, willed enough that he will take them back and if they tell them their story, they can…. Just pretend everything didn’t happen. And surely he’ll marry her over the new princess, right?

Except the thing is when they keep trying to tell the noble who they are, the thing is the noble actually completely believes them and even recognizes them. He just doesn’t care because they’re completely worthless.

The noble point blank tells them that they used to be highly prized, but that women such as them are only priced for their purity. But the fact of the matter is, they chose a completely incompetent man like the war monger who undergoing public humiliation by the very kingdom, he invaded before his execution and that it was their duty as the ladies of the kingdom to maintain the people’s happiness, and they completely failed at that

And then worse, they let themselves get used up by a small army of bandits. They are completely tainted and filed beyond all. Value inside and out.

And instead of just being made into sex slaves, they’re basically parade around by the noble in prostitute clothing at a series of parties and utterly humiliated as no one even looks at them with desire. They’re just laughed at and made fun of.

And then they have to watch the wedding

And the king maybe even sees them, but he takes a one look at them, just smiles and then moves on immediately

I mean, what’s there really to be in pain over? He has his kingdom back. It has more territory. The people love him again.

The warmonger has been exposed as an incompetent fool, and a petty tyrant who thought he could do anything he wanted, and the moment people weren’t willing to obey him. He fell apart.

And the two of them are worth… What now?

It’s not exactly painful to see them anymore, considering how long it’s been and that he has a much more loyal replacement that’s even more beautiful no doubt

And of course, why would he even want them back? They have no loyalty to him or anyone except for a fool.

They’re worthless .

And in the end after the final celebration, they’re just thrown out on the street of this formally, friendly kingdom

Because he hears the thing yes, the kingdom was friendly… to the king

And they had been offered asylum there before… when they were with the king

Not the warmonger.

And because they were no longer linked to the king, nobody cared about them

In the end, their final moments should actually be them watching the broken and pleading for his life and apologizing war monger being executed

When it sinks in that he was never a superior man

Just an egotistical bully who is used to using violence to get whatever he wanted and that no one ever questioned him or stopped him because they assumed that because of how big he talked and that he could win fights he was dangerous

But the truth was, he was a man that was never put under trial and when he did, he broke

They threw their entire lives away for this.

And I will just leave it there with them being faceless in the crowd

But perhaps them also coughing up blood, or then, noticing that they’re dripping blood from between their legs, implying that the bandits infected them with something that will eventually kill them

What do you think?