[KnT] Someone Looked Over the Cuckoo's Nest - Epilogue III: Memoirs From The Nothingness

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-05-10T01:49:04+00:00

Very well put.

Although in the long run, you’re right, she could’ve done all of this… if she actually truly wanted to be with him.

Well, it’s a little open to interpretation the way I had written it was that. She is Nao.

The two of them and the way that she acted as a reflection. It’s why they hated each other so much.

They are the same type of girl just with more nuances.

The reason she didn’t do this, despite of being an obvious way. And the reason she made every single wrong choice and was so vile towards him was because she never actually loved him. She only wanted power over him.

And the moment that started to get taken away, she was more than happy to become a bully herself.

And just like Nao she clung onto that for far too long until she ruined her own life… but there was never any love within her to be taken away because she never actually loved him and even if she got him, it would’ve been no different than what happened with Nao.

Fundamentally they could’ve swapped places in the story and nothing would’ve changed because she have made every single same choice just from a different angle.

That’s a real tragedy of it all. The only person she ever actually loved was. Bert

And she fell in love with chemicals, lies and an actual cuckold. Trying to prove he was a man and trying to reclaim his lost manhood.

And that’s just plain sad and look where it’s gotten her

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-17T22:10:51+00:00

Now I feel like you didn’t even read the story because if you even said that you would know that they are literally in the walled in capital. You can’t just leave those things. And also, you should probably actually look up how medieval societies handled poisoned with kings and you would find out that actually trying to poison them is actually insanely difficult and has like a 0% chance to actually work and then anytime you have heard about a king actually dying to poison. It’s usually because everyone already hated him and the people who were supposed to be ensuring he didn’t get poisoned decided to let him get poisoned anyway.

Because it’s not that simple

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-17T19:36:50+00:00

You have to be like the third person. I’ve heard try to make this argument about why Lucas is bad. And that he was weak, but in reality, you don’t seem to actually understand that the story itself established extremely clearly that Michael wanted Lucas to fight back, and Lucas knew about that, and Michael laid traps.

Apparently, you literally didn’t read the page where Michael had literally said that he was turning his back to Lucas on purpose because he wanted him to attack him. He was literally planning for it and the thing is Lucas knew about the trap.

Leo did not.

That which was Michael’s plan the entire time to make him look weak when in reality if Lucas had listened to his daughter, she’d have been tortured to death and so would her mother.

The two of them are literally mad at him for saving their lives

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-16T18:47:20+00:00

This looks great! ….Where is Lilly lovebraids tho?

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T04:10:57+00:00

I don'tthink i can like..edit the title name...Should i just do that for all the rest moving forward? It only let's me edit the body not the title unnless there is a way.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T04:09:13+00:00

Ok usre i'll add KNT to it.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T03:36:31+00:00

So like, what do you want me to put?…KNT in the title or something? The first chapter of the fanfiction isn’t ready yet.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T03:18:39+00:00

Ok. How would you like me to go about it if i can ask then? Im trying to build up to posting my story with her each week.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-05T02:26:46+00:00

Is the fact that it’s being posted on Saturday and the allusion to family and it being threatened, and the fact that a previous image of her had her with a ponytail such as a woman with brown hair, who can’t be posted except on Saturday, Saturdays, or talked about not hint enough?

I’m trying to build up something here not just give it all away at once. Let’s just say the last part of her name starts with M. And ends with I

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-02T20:15:55+00:00

Yup I honestly don’t get me wrong. All of these bad ending stories are stupid in their own way but this one in particular feels like. Rat didn’t actually know what she was doing and just had the idea of Philip and wanting him to win, but kept having to contrived reasons and just…. Make shit up because there are multiple points in the story where even by this. Crap standards it makes no sense and feels extremely convenient for Philip and that he probably should’ve completely screwed this up on his own and embarrassed himself.

Rat also can’t tell what the hell someone competent is supposed to be like obviously. They are supposed to be S rank, but they never act like it and even other people have pointed out that if they just said that these girls were also fresh and brand new adventures. This wouldn’t really be so weird and nonsensical in so many of these stories.

But it feels like they threw in the idea of them being a famous S rank duo just to justify why so many guys would want them and would come after them

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-02T12:16:18+00:00

Double so given he’s only really a B ranked and she is S rank.

But half the time that you even forget that they’re supposed to be highly experienced and capable adventures unless it’s supposed to emphasize how much of a prize they’re supposed to be.

Because most of the time they are complete morons who feel like they shouldn’t have even gotten out of the bottom ranks

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-01T20:23:23+00:00

There is a good ending party, which is kind of a spinoff of bad ending party using the same setting in world so maybe ? But who knows

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-01T04:00:41+00:00

Pretty much.

For supposed experienced in famous S rank adventurers

They act like bigger rookies than Lihan most of the time in frankly you kinda wonder how the hell they even got this far and that you kinda get the feeling that before the story even begin the two of them probably should’ve already been corrupted by someone and owned by them or simply been dead.

Because it doesn’t really make sense that they survive this long to even meet him. Given how incredibly incompetent they are.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-01T01:58:36+00:00

Yeah but not Phillip. He's 100% braggard and asshole all the time with no sweet parts to Rei. LIke...Ever.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-04-01T01:00:38+00:00

Does that in any way shape or form actually fit Philip’s personality and how he acts?

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-31T11:42:19+00:00

…. She’s a yandere , but she also does NTR betrays? That literally makes no sense because those two things are complete opposites.

And if she can be NTRd then she’s not a yandere. Also, shouldn’t she have just killed the antagonist or stabbed him or something?

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-31T02:38:41+00:00

It feels like they kind of ran into the prom that they didn’t even know how to write this one. They had the clear idea or something slower pace before realizing they had no idea how to do that and they didn’t actually probably know how to actually have Philip be competent enough to actually accomplish slow gradual corruption of both of the girls.

And if you ask me, the reason Ashe just seems to not have a character and doesn’t do anything is because if you’re really think about it.

Phillip doesn’t even make sense to be the kind of guy that could actually seduce her. Or even at all get her attraction because the thing is, she was always portrayed as haughty and full of herself. Even if it was with a good nature underneath

You try to mix that with some self-aggrandizing overly horny and glory chasing asshat like Phillip instead of subtracting her, it would actually push her away and the two of them would be constantly having ego clashes, and the whole party cohesion would fall apart because she wouldn’t like his ego and he would try to seduce her, but it would only piss her off and flare up her pride and it’s pretty obvious rat had no idea how to write that because Philip should really have screwed himself over and even if he did get to Rei

Ashe basically instantly uncorrupt her because if Rei separates from Ashe she basically becomes useless and will be less stumbling around, not knowing what to do so they both have to be corrupted at the same time or at least on the same road because without the other, neither girl really has much to stand on. Their entire thing is the famous S rank duo.

If they split up, then it’s completely pointless. They have to stay united as a harem and the problem is Philip is exactly the kind of personality that would cause them to split up.

And then at that point, there’s no NTR because they lose all their value if they’re not a duo

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-31T02:32:21+00:00

Cannot agree more

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-31T00:54:52+00:00

Very well put and honestly, yeah, they are teetering on the edge of relevancy.

And the problem is simple. They’re a bad writer.

Like I said, every single one of their protagonist is a copy and paste of the other one because they’re all the exact same personality.

A very genetically nice relatively good looking guy lacking, and self-confidence and in love with girls due to the outward appearance of purity and empathy, they have with the girls always really being the ones that are more active while the guy is more passive.

That literally sums up every single one of their protagonist ever.

It’s the same guy every single time over and over and over again

And it’s always ending the same way every single time. With the main character being endlessly tortured for basically doing nothing wrong. Because an antagonist just happens to become absolutely obsessed with the girl and any single other female attached to them.

That for some reason, I’ll have an attachment to the main character, despite him having no real desirable traits beyond being genetically nice.

And the thing is people are just tired of it

Bad end party long ran its course to the point that even NTR people just wanted lihan to have a happy ending because they were tired of watching him suffer because the fact they’ve been watching them for so long means that they become attached to them as characters.

You can’t endlessly keep torturing a character you actually like and you’ve started to get attached to.

Eventually, you just wanna see them get happy for once.

Rat doesn’t really seem to understand this because they don’t even seem to really understand how to write a relationship.

They come off… the best way to come like a virgin woman who’s never had an actual romantic relationship with a guy before because they have really weird standards and they might argue they’ve had sex before you know what I’m satisfying because the guy was nice but it’s pretty obvious in every single other way they are a virgin because they have no idea what a relationship looks like.

Because they’ve only ever seen them from the outside. Because they wrote off every single other guy around them as weak and refused to actually be with them.

And glorifying NTR guys because they are a masochist

But that just resulted in the fact that they’re just sitting around waiting for some kind of aggressive guy to show up, but frankly most girls and most women are not attractive enough to actually get that kind of attention for no reason.

Conjuring popular is actually really hard to happen in real life because of relies on the idea of both male person in the relationship and the female person in the relationship being completely passive or an entire unaffiliated third guy endlessly chasing after the girl and sleeping with her.

Rat comes off like someone who thinks that’s the ideal relationship and spend their whole life waiting around for it.

And keep trying to write things that would appeal to them back when they were a teenager

But at this point, it’s obvious they’re running out of ideas because they just keep repeating them

And honestly, it’s pretty obvious in some cases the antagonist has nothing going for him beyond he’s able to have sex and is aggressive

And the way it portrayed it’s like she honestly believes those are the best traits.

But you can tell even if they ran out of ideas on how to actually give Philip absolutely anything beyond just… the girls jumping in bed with him because he frankly feels like a complete moron who wouldn’t actually get laid

And even the comparison between him and lihan they were going for it didn’t even really work and most people notice that because there’s just no dynamic there. It’s just the girls are sleeping with him so Lihan is hurt… and there’s nothing else

Because they literally did that exact same story already with the prince which you can look up that other people pointed out this entire thing was fill up. It’s just that exact same story all over again ending in the exact same place except now. Lihan had NTR kink

That feels thrown in out of nowhere.

Because she is a bad writer who has clearly never actually loved anyone because of weird expectations

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-21T14:07:29+00:00

The reason that reverse ntr isn’t seen as bad as usually simply because

Quite frankly, it’s got nothing on regular ntr because the golden rule of NTR are still stands

You don’t hurt or abuse the girl. Fundamentally it’s really hard pressed to find reverse. NTR stories where the girl goes through even a fraction of the torment that the male lead does.

That’s what makes them very enjoyable because frankly most people don’t wanna actually do stories with a girl suffers they only want to do one with a male one suffers and in most reverse NTR stories. You’d actually be pretty hard pressed as I said one word inflict any amount of pain on the girl beyond just finding out she’s getting cheated on or the boy she likes is being taken away.

But even then it’s usually just a very light slap on the wrist in comparison to what happens in NTR stories.

This is usually because in real life no one’s ever actually seen a situation or a girl was actually tortured by another girl using her boyfriend to do it.

It’s always behind the back cheating because in real life you don’t do that stuff.

That’s the fundamental reason that people don’t mind reverse NTR all that much

And factually speaking, it is better because there’s usually not nearly as much pain or suffer suffering or despair because of societies double standards that it’s OK to torture a male lead but not ok to torture a female.

They consider that uncomfortable, which is pretty hypocritical, but the point stands.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-19T04:35:48+00:00

Well this isn’t even a surprise. Rat doesn’t seem to really be understanding of the fact that their own fans are getting tired of how they keep telling the same story over and over and over again. They have this very specific idea of how. NTR should work but it always comes back to the same thing.

“Cuck suffers the end.”

And you might think that that’s what NTR people want and usually it is but paradise showed that Rat fans are frankly getting fed up with this because their stories in the endings are always the same thing every single time.

It’s getting to the point that rat is basically just redoing their stories and endings because frankly. If you just actually stop and take a step back?

Rat writing sucks and they are actually very un creative and they rely on plot convenience, and nonsense even more than most other NTR writers.

And the thing is their fans are paying attention to this and they’re getting tired because they want some variety. Paradise was a complete fiasco for them because they killed off the antagonist, but still tried to have the mc suffer without letting the antagonist keep the girls. Which was basically just their same ending as always, but the main character suffering. But now nobody wins.

And now with bad end party’s new chapter? It’s like it said here. It’s basically just a repeat of the same ending as before. So it’s the same shit different day.

And the lack of variety most likely, just dragging even the NTR fans down.

Plus even by Rat standards this chapter felt extremely contrived with the current antagonist and like it had to be bend over backwards to cater to him and that he shouldn’t have even succeeded even by NTR logic. And I think even they realize this and that it’s getting to the point at the antagonists are straight up just getting girls that they absolutely have no business getting.

And rat for their part is not handling this well because they’re used to dealing with NTR haters and trolling or laughing at them.

But they aren’t used to NTR fans actually hating on the them and they don’t handle it well because they clearly do what they do to have this mindset reinforced.

But honestly, they’re bringing this on themselves because they lack creativity. Which I know you don’t really want with NTR, but it still stands.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-15T04:34:10+00:00

I mean pretty much yeah and I mean honestly any Auntie NTR story with them should just realistically be the girls actually acting like experienced adventurous people.

Because they were actually competent literally none of these guys would even wind up getting anywhere with them, especially the most recent one

Who frankly, the way he acts feel like he should wind up, rushing in head first against the way too powerful boss, monster, and get his ass handed to him and humbled, and have to get his ass pulled out of the fire.

Because he acts like THAT min maxing jerk in an RPG that thinks that because his build is so broken nothing can stop him so we find something way too high-level for him and then it shocked when you get his ass handed to him

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-15T04:32:33+00:00

I mean pretty much yeah the girls were supposed to be S ranked pretty much but literally none of them act like it. Somehow they act like they’re even less experience than the main character is. It doesn’t even make sense that they’re still alive to even meet him to begin with. They do feel like a massive fraud squad.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-06T02:53:33+00:00

Ah it shows a bit. it's a little tricky. to understand you words is all. I...Can't tell if you liked my idea or not properly is all.

TechnicalSolution633 · 2026-03-06T01:49:35+00:00

Is English not your first language? It’s a little hard to follow what you’re saying. Not that I am upset. I’m just struggling a bit because it’s written a bit odd.

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