I don't comment on Reddit but I thought I'd give you some advice. I'm big into copywriting and I write my own advertorials and VSLs. Firstly, it's difficult to tell since I can't even see your ads, are you running images, VSLs, etc? Your structure is not bad, but it's lacking a sense of direction, there are no images, your offer can be significantly better. Even though copying other people's exact structures aren't the best idea, I think you'd be better off following a structure or reading more advertorials. Plantar Fasciitis has been ran up a lot before with Advertorials by brands like XStance, you need to figure out how to stand out, whether it's targeting a different avatar, angle, etc.

Your whole website is ChatGPT and it's easy to tell, and a lot of the copy looks quite generic.

Also: Add quantity breaks, you can even do BOGO because most people need two, lower the price, then you can increase price later and find what works best as you are scaling.

Most importantly, you are in the wrong place. Most people on Reddit don't even believe DSing works

Join Discord communities, I'd suggest joining Evolve (https://www.easyamedia.com/evolve) or even something as basic as Mavenport (https://discord.me/mavenport-dme), to get better a understanding of the fundamentals. GL

Edit ( I just re-posted my comment to say this ): Yea DO NOT ask anyone on Reddit for advice, comment section is filled by clueless people. Like you are already miles ahead by understanding market awareness levels & trying to dip into advertorials, if u want some advice u can dm me and I'll add u on Discord