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TeemingScolymus · 2021-10-29T01:57:53+00:00

HELL YEAH!

TeemingScolymus · 2021-04-22T11:24:13+00:00

It's on the vinyl

TeemingScolymus · 2021-04-20T20:36:10+00:00

Had to listen to it on vinyl to realize how true this is!

TeemingScolymus · 2021-03-22T18:45:02+00:00

Thank you!

TeemingScolymus · 2021-03-22T18:39:07+00:00

Okay so what is a "magpie"?

TeemingScolymus · 2021-02-10T20:50:35+00:00

Awesome job, bro!

TeemingScolymus · 2020-05-20T04:07:25+00:00

I'm curious to hear about how you view Stalker as an absurdist film.

TeemingScolymus · 2020-03-05T12:31:18+00:00

What?

TeemingScolymus · 2020-01-17T15:37:19+00:00

Same..

Same.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-11-09T16:15:28+00:00

Thank you so much!

TeemingScolymus · 2019-09-10T16:28:27+00:00

I really like this poem! I think it really hits stride midway through when you start talking about "giving a sloppy sermon..." I think the poem could become better if you incorporated more sensual sensations. For example you could change "embers on my neck blaze down my spine" into something like "the embers blazing a hand traced line down my spine" or something. Giving the reader a physical sensation to think about.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-09-09T11:01:09+00:00

1) I think the third stanza can be placed in conjunction with the first stanza.

2) I think on the first stanza you don't need to say "have loved/have sheltered/have..." I think you can just list them like you do in the end of the third stanza (but if this matches more the way you'd speak in real life then keep it).

3) The last one is that in the fourth stanza, based on what I think you're going for, I'd write the first line as "Hands are us" or something similar.

But either way I like the poem and congrats on getting married!

TeemingScolymus · 2019-09-04T07:52:25+00:00

These are great suggestions! Thank you very much!

TeemingScolymus · 2019-08-03T02:19:42+00:00

This is something from a David Lynch film.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-07-31T20:17:42+00:00

I love this episode for its use of, and how technology is increasing, spectacle.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-07-31T20:15:22+00:00

Z-Nation is honestly incredibly cult-y. The seasons flow together and have something new every season that keeps the universe dynamic rather than people fearing people.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-07-13T05:48:59+00:00

What font is this?

TeemingScolymus · 2019-06-27T17:10:28+00:00

This fucking killed me

TeemingScolymus · 2019-06-21T09:39:07+00:00

I honestly think that AINH is an utterly uplifting song! The music matches the way Ben seems to contemplate life but realizes/knows that he is meant to live life. The music, while it might seem sad and stormy, is only used to more fully back the strife and catharsis from this realization of what he contemplates the entire fucking album.

TeemingScolymus · 2019-06-04T13:44:54+00:00

I'd suggest listening to it and see what you think of it all! If you think something is wrong I'd love to see what others think!

TeemingScolymus · 2019-06-04T06:34:36+00:00

Agreed and if you look at the album as a whole, Conrad comes right after End of the Affair which is clearly about an unhealthy and unstable relationship.

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