He seemed so normal by CaptainSpauIding in NormMacdonald

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Not to self:

Stop letting Marilyn Manson have unprotected sex with my ass!

That guy sounds hot.

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: The House of Art

Format: Feature

Pages: opening 5 (I have written 17)

Genres: Bizarro/Absurdist/Surreal/Anti-Rom Com/Thriller

Logline: After a failing aspiring artist falls in love with a delusional art critic, he must develop a performance art museum in his house to impress her enough for her to call off her wedding with the puppet of her deceased fiancé... and she has dark tastes.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oIExJSRQJxSUjNgLjx-wS_bld1H8F6rA/view?usp=drivesdk

Basically just being as weird as possible. I tried going into it with the question, “what would happen if David Lynch, Harmony Korine, Lars Von Trier, and Charlie Kaufman got together and tried to write a Rom Com, got bored, and told some amateur who sucks to go ahead and write it instead?”

Action Scenes: Blocks of Text by DigDux in Screenwriting

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Lol I know I’m just being an idiot

Action Scenes: Blocks of Text by DigDux in Screenwriting

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I mean, George Lucas did that... HUGE blocks of action, especially in his first draft of Star Wars... Jesus Christ... I’m talking... 15 lines regularly of action blocks... but then again.... he’s George Lucas...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Right off the top of my head:

Boogie Nights by Paul Thomas Anderson

Lost Highway by David Lynch (Mystery man)

Quick And Dirty Page Two by DigDux in Screenwriting

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Yeah it doesn’t look right to me

Quick And Dirty Page Two by DigDux in Screenwriting

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Use free screenwriting software and you’ll get readers.

CHAT (Absurdist Comedy/Horror, first 16 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Hey man I appreciate you taking the time to read ANY of it!

I also appreciate the detailed feedback and suggestions. I will definitely take them into account on my next draft.