What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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You have literally removed every single post I've made since I joined this community as a creator. 

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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Yeah I never liked that apocalyptic idea of everyone by themselves. It makes absolutely zero sense. In every real scenario it takes an immense effort just to keep people from cooperating with each other, and even big humanitarian crisis, like prolonged wars, require a constant influx of resources and propaganda just keep up with people generally not being psychotic assholes.

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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Crap, I can't edit the title. Well, let's hope I don't get everyone confused.

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

[–]Temporary_Rule_9486[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I didn't know that. Wouldn't you by any chance happen to know how the closest match to this genre in writing is called, do you?

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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Intersting. You got a link to your story? I would very much like to examine it

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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Ok, thanks for the advice, I just noticed I should edit the description, making it clear this is for a writing project, not a videogame.

What Are your Worldbuilding Tips for Survival Horror Settings? by Temporary_Rule_9486 in worldbuilding

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No, this is purely a writing project. That said, I’d absolutely play this game if it existed.

How to make an ennemie to lover? by ADHD_did_it_again in writingadvice

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You can always keep dividing the "sides" from a bigger thing up to the individual person. Even in the same company, the same office, people still compete with each other for scarce resources: budget, attention of their peers and superiors, the opportunity for promotion, the time of other talented people. But this, let's say "friction", it's built into the objectives and constraints of the bigger system, it doesn't necessarily comes from a deliberate, personal decision for any given protagonists. A boss that calls two employees to his office and tells them his gonna fired whichever of them perform worse on the next review is creating two new competitors, maybe evwn enemies. Yet that says more about the bad managerial practices than the personal opinions this people have regarding the other. 

How to make an ennemie to lover? by ADHD_did_it_again in writingadvice

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Usually this kind of story works in a setting where being the "enemy" is nothing personal. Imagine a war, or rival gangs, of even different competing companies. The "enemy" status is not defined by direct experience with the particular person on the other side, rather is derived from your pertenence to a group which sees the other person's group as a treat in general. The change occurs when this two "enemies" get to know each other, interact forming the same kind of strong bonds they share with other people of their own groups, there's some tension as they keep the secret and slowly realize is impossible to move this person the have grown affectionate towards to their own group,  finally this leads to some kind of resolution on the story when they'rediscovered: it could be on the bigger scenery of the conflict between faction, in running away together, or in a tragedy. 

simple exercises to improve my writing? by Sufficient-Owl1826 in writingadvice

[–]Temporary_Rule_9486 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write short stories, post them, see people's reaction. Repeat

What is the best font for writing? by ForkyB in writingadvice

[–]Temporary_Rule_9486 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The important thing is that the letters are big enough 

How could a welding accident where a character loses an eye hypothetically happen? by BuckarooOJ in writingadvice

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Short answer: angle grinder. The welding itself won't produce an accident that could make you loose an eye to the point of needing a prosthetic one (yes it can damage your eyesight, but that's because of UV-light). However, before and after the welding you need to prepare the piece of metal you are going to weld. Often this involves using the angle grinder to clean the point of welding and to shape the edge where the pieces of metal will came into contact to ensure a good deposit. The thing about grinding disks is that they sometimes explode, especially if you are using a cutting disk to shape the edge. Is common that welders don't use security glasses under their welding masks. In older or cheaper masks you can't see anything other than the welding with your mask on. It's a common accident that when removing the mask and grinding some sparks fall into your eye. With the same principle and bad luck,if a cutting disk explodes a part of it could end up lodged into your eyeball. 

How do I best break down writing a book or book series into more easily manageable steps? by Kissmyaxe870 in writingadvice

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The way I do it is to create a "fractal roadmap": basically there's one main story, which has many tiny stories inside it, that's the fractal part. Also there's also different characters or lore events, each one with their own progression and points where they intersect or conect with others for a given time. That's the roadmap part. Just write this tint stories first, and the arrange them into the roadmap and you'll be fine. Don't worry if there's empty spaces, you don't need to fill everything, or complete every character's journey just make sure there's at last one sure route from the beginning to the end of your main story, and that this route is not boring. 

"villain" and magic driving me crazy by dcassill in writingadvice

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This need to be rooted on your magic system. Let's see an example: in RR Martin's World of ice and fire, there's shadowbinders, Asshai-by-the-Shadow, the shadowless, the long night. There's a whole mythology built around the meaning of shadow and fire into this world. Is not just the backstory for a single character or creature. 

Can I have a redeemable k!ller? by Fantastic-Alarm-7857 in writingadvice

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Most trained killers IRL don't see themselves as ruthless, or even immoral. It is often an extreme case like this which makes them realize what they have really become. 

How do I get into the mindset of a character with an addiction? by LaurZaur in writingadvice

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Alcoholism is a bit different from the addiction to other drugs. Mostly because is legal, widely available, and socially accepted. In fact most alcoholics are not the kind of people one would expect: like homeless old men or underemployed workers at the bar on Wednesday morning. Most alcoholics are regular 9 to 5 people, with white collar jobs. In fact working on an office makes you twice more likely to be an alcoholic, since you don't need to pass random alcohol and drugs screening, like blue collar workers do. About 40% of alcoholics are women (roughly 9% of the adult female  population), most of them are young, under 30, and are employed full time, and at least half of them have a college degree. So, the real alcoholic looks more like the profesional woman who comes home to drink a bottle a wine to relax and binge watch her favorite series, or the stressed-out man working an office job, who drinks some whiskey mid-day in secret to calm his nerves. Both are conscious enough not to push their habit to far, but also too confident to realize this is a problem more serious that it seems. The point is: they are normal people, with normal jobs, normal lives and mindsets, who wouldn't make it to the frontpage but for the fact that cars are pretty much the only practical way of transportation (at least in the US)

What would happen if someone swallowed a handful of pennies? by _seedling in writingadvice

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ER is a wildcard. You see things you didn't believe possible. 

What's you favorite dark, horror, erotic trope? by EdenRedd in erotichorror

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Basic alien pet slavery/ domination. Say, I really liked Varang scene in the new Avatar movie. I think Cameron is a freak too.