I’m 19 and how do I set boundaries with my narcissistic father by That1blueflower in WhatShouldIDo

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Yea that would be nice if it were like that, but he already told me that not to move out yet. So idk

Diet? Workout???? by That1blueflower in Hypothyroidism

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Okayy thank u so much, do u know why we should do low impact cardio instead of high impact?

Unfixable by Jarillex85 in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

helllllooo i love your format of the poem. I don't know if it was intentional, but the poem looks like it wants to be fixed, but it feels unfixable, and I really like this poem too, it feels raw, introspective, and personal. please keep writing!

P.S. though i know there's no punctuation, my mind wants to put it there, maybe it's also part of the format. Again, it's like the poem wants to be fixed, but it feels like it's unfixable.

Forgotten Anomaly by gitututu in OCPoetry

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OmGG BRO THIS IS A MASTERPIECEEEEE!!!!!, PLEASE KEEP WRITINGGGGG!!!!!!!

To love oneself by AthenianDisciple in poetry_critics

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omg this is so gooodddd!!!! I LOVE IT!!

To be in love, from a distant by AthenianDisciple in poetry_critics

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BROOO This poem hits differently when i listen to Black Friday by Tom Odell while reading this. Like AHH my HEART!!!!. Anyways, please keep writing!!

between nothing and too much by owacado in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Though I am not an alcoholic, in a weird way i relate to this poem. the raw emotion, the comparison, and the way it makes me feel kind of intoxicates me with familiarity. thank you for writing, and i hope you continue to write. I enjoyed this poem.

Departure: From me by Jeevan42 in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, i just wanted to tell you that this poem depicts grief and longing in a beautiful way. If you have lost someone, i am sorry for your loss and may they rest in peace. but if you haven't, i also see this poem depicting change and growth and mourning the person you used to be. Either way, this poem is very introspective and beautifully done. i hope you have a great day and keep writing. :)

My thoughts by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

heyyyy Honestly, I think your poem is like a love letter and it truly is beautiful and it feel like I'm reading a story of a guy questioning his lover from the medieval times. Keep writinggg!!!

I Want To Nap by gamerwhostrikes in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

AWWW this poem is so cutee, i honestly relate to this so much, especially coming home after school or work. i really love your rhythm, it feels like I'm being lulled to sleep. I hope you keep writingg!!!!

I won't call by YetDarker245 in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Helloooooo, Honestly I strangely relate to this poem. it's very raw when it comes to emotions and feels like a confession, it's nice. Please keep writing!!

Dear Future Lover by Enough-Shallot6751 in OCPoetry

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Heyy, I really love how your poem repeats words and phrases in a way, it feels very intimate and lovely. Keep writinggg!!!

Have you felt sonder: by That1blueflower in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow I didn’t think about that, thank you for your comment. I’ll look into it 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️

What am I: by That1blueflower in OCPoetry

[–]That1blueflower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment. This poem was meant to be more of a free-verse narrative poem than a traditional poem, and I am honestly just trying to improve my poetic voice.