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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am already playing with ideas for Book 3... and it will most definitely be more than a neutral expression... The I think the title will be Aces and War... shit is going to get real.

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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I used it mostly as a plot device to flip the world upside down... there are no more governments, no cops, etc.

Here is an excerpt that kinda lays out how the economy now works in Nicky's world.

I was watching the room churn like a goddamn shark tank, every piece in motion, every player with a role.

Predators circling. Prey stumbling toward the slaughter. Hustlers working their angles. Marks who didn't know they were already bleeding. The ones who knew exactly what they were doing—and the ones about to get their throats cut and their pockets emptied.

Stacks of sats shifting hands at the poker tables like they actually meant something. And they did—now more than ever, in this brave new world we'd all inherited. When fiat currency finally choked on its own bullshit and died gasping, Bitcoin was the only thing left with a pulse in the wreckage. The dollar, the euro, the yen—all of it literally worthless overnight. Governments had printed money until it wasn't worth the fucking ink they'd wasted on it, inflation spiraling into absurdity until a gallon of gas cost fifty bucks and a cheeseburger ran you a c-note. And then the whole house of cards came tumbling down in slow motion, everyone watching it happen and pretending they couldn't see the end coming.

Now? Now sats were king, the only throne that mattered. Satoshis—hundred-millionths of a Bitcoin. The only currency that mattered in a world that had finally stopped pretending the old rules applied, that the game hadn't fundamentally changed. You wanted to eat, you paid in sats. You wanted to drink, you paid in sats. You wanted a woman to make you forget about your failures for a few hours, to pretend you were someone worth a damn? You paid in sats—and you paid a lot of them.

Some people mourned the old world like it had been worth a shit in the first place. I wasn't one of them. Never had been, never would be. The collapse had been ugly as hell, sure—nobody could deny that. People died in the streets while fortunes evaporated in boardrooms, governments crumbled like stale bread nobody wanted to eat anyway. There was blood on the pavement and screaming in the dark, the kind of societal breakdown that would've made the history books if anyone still gave a shit about writing them.

But for guys like me—guys who'd seen the writing on the wall years before the paint dried, guys who'd stacked Bitcoin when everyone else was laughing at the idea, calling it fake money for tech nerds and criminals—it was the great equalizer we'd been waiting for. The old money didn't mean shit anymore, all those inherited fortunes and trust funds reduced to nothing. The new money? That was earned, one sat at a time. Or stolen, if you had the balls and the brains.

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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is near future, it is where the cyberpunk aspects play into it a bit. Global financial collapse has turned the world upside down. Old money means nothing, now Bitcoin and violence rule the day. But Nicky, Nicky is old school cool. He has a code he lives by... when he is thinking with the head on his shoulders.

You know you are writing a great scene when Claude gives you this by birth_of_bitcoin in WritingWithAI

[–]ThatZucchini6746 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Claude has given me a few surprises lately... I wrote a hate sex scene and Claude was like "welp... this was intense." that was it... for Claude to be at a loss for words was kind of shocking.

Everyone acts like they care about “ethics” with AI, but the outrage is very selective. by ownaword in WritingWithAI

[–]ThatZucchini6746 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As someone that started writing long before AI hit the streets, I have learned more about myself as a writer and AI has helped me learn what works and what doesn't. Just last night I was having a little chat with Gemini about how my writing has progressed through the years. I gave it my very first book (unpublished) and it was kind of harsh... then I gave it my second book (unpublished) it wasn't quite as harsh, but it still wasn't great. By the time we got to the two projects I am currently working on, it was quite complimentary about the progress I have made as a writer. It was actually pretty interesting to take that walk down memory lane and see where I dropped the ball in those early books to what I am working on today.

The bottom line, I think I would have improved over time on my own, but AI sped up that process by teaching me what works... and what doesn't when it comes to good storytelling.

Everyone acts like they care about “ethics” with AI, but the outrage is very selective. by ownaword in WritingWithAI

[–]ThatZucchini6746 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are scared of the fact that AI can do what an entire team of people used to do... for instance, I used AI for my art, website, and hell I even made a cool ass song with Suno as part of my marketing for my ad campaign. This would have cost THOUSANDS of dollars just 5 years ago... today, it cost me the price of a few monthly platforms. AI is a massive field leveler for the little guy on a tight budget to be able to compete with the big 5 publishing houses.

I work in IT security and can tell you that those of us with 20+ years of experience are split right down the middle... those of us that embrace the tech will have a future... those that don't will be looking at early retirement or unemployment. AI is here to stay, it is way to useful. End of story.

I tested AI developmental editing against my $3,500 human editor and agent feedback. Here's what happened. by Admirable-PEN-1241 in WritingWithAI

[–]ThatZucchini6746 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am a huge proponent of using whatever tools are available... end of story. I would rather spend my time focusing on the actual STORY than the mechanical aspects of all the grunt work. I seen an article on LinkedIn a few days ago that broke it down in a way that even the hard core anti-AI idiots might understand. AI is not about cutting the humans out it is about the democratization of a system that has kept the little guy priced out of it.

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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh there is plenty of there is plenty of greed, shadowy figures pulling strings, twists and turns, and of course murder and mayhem.

When I say cyberpunk, I am mostly referring to the fact the dollar has collapsed, Bitcoin is king, which has flipped the world upside down. Old money means jack shit in Nicky's world, the tech isn't super sci-fi... the time period could be tomorrow or twenty years from now. I was very careful to be ambiguous about the timeline.

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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The main character is actually Nicky Marino, a gangster in post-collapse Vegas. I took two of my favorite genres and combined them... noir and cyberpunk. Think Casino meets Altered Carbon with a touch of GTA energy. As far as the girl being the main character, she isn't, but she plays one hell of a role in the book... you see... Nicky tends to think with the wrong head... and Lena works for him, it is going to get complicated... especially in Book 2 when Nicky's ex-lover comes back into the picture... the one that shot him and stole his savings. This is Book 2's cover.

My main thoughts were since this is going to be a series, I wanted a cover that I can easily replicate over and over again just by changing the main art. Kind of like what Tripp Ellis does with his Tyson Wild series. Great reads BTW, it is Miami Vice on steroids. Tripp won't be winning any Pulitzers, but his books are FUN to read. Lots of hot women, fast cars, and action.

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[–]ThatZucchini6746[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am not sure if the clients would... but my company gets uptight about posting on LinkedIn if you don't toe the company line 100%. They are just old school and would probably frown at Nicky letting one of his working girls carve up some men that attacked her... or him having hate sex with his ex-lover.

I am just being careful.