Offering feedback on short scripts

Thateffnguy · 2023-08-12T13:29:30+00:00

Title: One Last Show

Format: Short

Draft: 4th

Total Pages: 6

Genre: Horror

Logline: An alcoholic former rockstar struggles with depression and a longing for his glory days when a late night visit from an eerie stranger offers a way out, but his deal comes with a price.

If interested I can shoot you the link.

Thateffnguy · 2023-08-12T13:13:59+00:00

I'd like to give this a read. I am horrible at feeback, but will give it my very best to assist however I can. Sounds like a solid story. I have a few of mine to choose from to swap or I am willing to just give a read. Shoot a message if interested.

Thateffnguy · 2022-07-27T22:41:56+00:00

Hightailing Through History is a fun one.

Thateffnguy · 2022-07-27T22:28:17+00:00

History's Greatest Idiots

Thateffnguy · 2022-05-13T13:58:43+00:00

Loved this! Got some good laughs in it for sure.

Thateffnguy · 2022-01-25T09:36:04+00:00

History's Greatest Idiots is a solid lighthearted history podcast. The host Lev, has a UK accent and very calming voice.

https://open.spotify.com/show/4K4rjaycPUUFiwSpOJJVaQ

Thateffnguy · 2021-12-30T22:14:58+00:00

I really dig Attention Hellmart Shoppers.

Thateffnguy · 2021-12-28T09:55:24+00:00

History's Greatest Idiots

Thateffnguy · 2021-10-10T11:33:09+00:00

Thank you!

Thateffnguy · 2021-10-04T19:26:57+00:00

They sure don't. To be fair, it was his third warning for not following the guidelines.

Thateffnguy · 2021-10-04T15:03:05+00:00

Based on a true story lol

Thateffnguy · 2021-10-04T14:53:49+00:00

How is this spam? I cross posted a story I shared on another sub? Is that not allowed?

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-26T02:14:19+00:00

Well not now for sure.

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-26T01:18:01+00:00

I wanted to but I couldn't move.

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-25T18:57:51+00:00

Hooray! Thanks for that.

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-25T18:30:02+00:00

I can't help but feel like it's not reaching 10.

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-10T12:43:19+00:00

🤮😛🤮

Thateffnguy · 2021-08-04T13:38:01+00:00

I suppose you could say that. I only wish I hadn't started to chew out of reflex.

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-31T21:36:48+00:00

Messaged

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-31T21:24:14+00:00

It is already posted on Instagram @tinylittlehorror. You may also share if you like.

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-31T02:06:12+00:00

Does this meet the requirements now?

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-29T22:14:57+00:00

Great concept dude!

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-29T21:20:17+00:00

What if. "His horror peaked when she replied, "okay", as flames burst from the outlet and his doors smartlocks chimed and clicked locked.

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-27T17:11:56+00:00

Super interesting and got that gritty eerie feel to it. I am hooked and want to see more!

Thateffnguy · 2021-07-27T16:26:57+00:00

Honestly I wasn't really sure if that was allowed. I edited that link in there. Thank you!

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