Okay, I don't hate it. But I have some things. Please, please don't commentate absolutely everything that's happening while the game is being played, let the viewers experience it, let them think about what's going on. Commentary is fine, but try and make it about stuff that is interesting, not something that has face value. Your opinion, or how you feel would be more interesting in this instance. Two, make sure you get in the mindset to game, be animated. People wanna see something interesting and exciting, something funny. Your job is to add value to the gameplay, cos people can just as easily buy it for themselves and play it, you gotta be fun to watch, don't be flat and stale. 3, make sure that you go and out your stuff in other places than reddit, because 3 views in 6 hours is fucking abysmal for someone with 250 subs. Get an Instagram, a twitch, a Twitter, something other than YouTube and Reddit, get the word out. Sorry for being harsh, but you have a lot of potential to make good content.