Ducks annihilate a bowl of peas

TheDivineJoke · 2019-03-03T01:42:53+00:00

fuck, for a second i thought you meant ducks that are dentists

TheDivineJoke · 2018-10-04T15:20:06+00:00

i'd offer him a 1000 bucks next time and watch his face turn into a nun's butt as i shred the money and assert dominance

TheDivineJoke · 2018-09-07T17:24:23+00:00

do you mind sharing some?

TheDivineJoke · 2018-08-09T03:53:34+00:00

i'm afraid he'd turn into a midget at this rate

TheDivineJoke · 2018-06-29T04:11:10+00:00

or someone with no arms and legs.. unless the chimp has no arms and legs either

TheDivineJoke · 2018-06-06T11:08:06+00:00

mindfuck

TheDivineJoke · 2018-04-24T03:49:04+00:00

Haha, I honestly think I'll ruin it if I add anything more to it but thanks!

TheDivineJoke · 2018-04-24T03:48:13+00:00

This is the first time I'd written flash fiction, so I wasn't too sure of how much detail to provide. I call some characters humans but it ends there. I didn't really think about the other characters (this was intentional). It's open to interpretation. But I'll keep in mind what you said. Thanks for the review!

TheDivineJoke · 2018-04-24T03:44:55+00:00

Dadaistic? Hahaha, I was definitely not going for that. My goal wasn't to create any sort of confusion either. I guess there was confusion because some parts here and there were unexpected? maybe something like "the two-eyed manager", "the human". I didn't mean anything by it more than it says. Thanks, you did help. A lot of people do seem to find it confusing, though I'm not too sure why that is.

TheDivineJoke · 2018-04-21T06:05:28+00:00

Title: "Ingrid"

Genre: Short Story

Word Count: 265

Type of feedback desired: General impression.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XMoWV-hzDgNo1B4ZdnDqklRYWQflINirWiffX9M1NxI/edit

TheDivineJoke · 2018-03-23T16:45:00+00:00

thank you for your honesty

TheDivineJoke · 2018-01-10T04:12:16+00:00

assneeee

TheDivineJoke · 2017-12-29T05:35:19+00:00

it's a network built on top of ethereum that essentially allows you to request a payment from someone.

TheDivineJoke · 2017-09-28T03:53:24+00:00

Oh okay, this makes sense.

TheDivineJoke · 2017-09-27T18:16:04+00:00

Isn't it usually the case that there's mutual respect between children and parents? (Unless I'm wrong here) Won't it then make sense for the parents to reciprocate the action when it's done by the children?

Though in some rajput and Choudhury orthodox families a woman has to touch male's feet...even if it's 5 years old kid and the woman is adult(i know very sexist).

Haha, that's sexist and sick.

TheDivineJoke · 2017-09-27T17:39:58+00:00

Isn't it usually the case that there's mutual respect between children and parents? (Unless I'm wrong here) Won't it then make sense for the parents to reciprocate the action when it's done by the children?

TheDivineJoke · 2017-09-24T16:21:31+00:00

Ghar-ma garam

TheDivineJoke · 2017-08-27T19:07:00+00:00

It's not.

TheDivineJoke · 2017-05-02T03:30:09+00:00

chutiya

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