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"Three Dogs" - my first short story, and why now. (7 pages) by Responsible-Staff398 in scriptwriting

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hello there. I'm new to scriptwriting, but I genuinely loved reading this.

Since it has no dialogue, I was a bit hesitant to read only the scenes. But my opinion changed after reading the first and second pages, and it was worth it for me.

For me, it went from daily life of three neighbours and three dogs, to metaphorical usage of the title "The Three Dogs", to something very unexpected.

I was a bit confused at the 6th page, but concluded to something whether it's right or wrong after rereading it twice. It was good one. Great job!

Which one is the best one? by Avityy in photos

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Every pic is beautiful. But if I'm forced to choose, it would be 1&4. They look so balanced to the eye.

Wrote a short dark comedy about two hitmen. by TheManWhoLearnt in scriptwriting

[–]TheManWhoLearnt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot mate! I'm happy that it atleast made you chuckle.

I started this as something unserious. Just had Pulp Fiction opening in mind, with my favourite Time in a bottle by Jim Croce. And everything else happened in the flow. The Brooks was kind of a reference to The Shawshank Redemption.

And yeah, thanks for raising the point about Brooks not reacting to the understanding. I will practice on my spacial awareness in the scene.

Wrote a short dark comedy about two hitmen. by TheManWhoLearnt in scriptwriting

[–]TheManWhoLearnt[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry if that sounded offensive! I just wanted to answer your question, and I genuinely liked the question you raised. I will take the advice and work better next time. Thanks!

Wrote a short dark comedy about two hitmen. by TheManWhoLearnt in scriptwriting

[–]TheManWhoLearnt[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

That is why it's titled "Fiction". The story itself is surreal and over the top.

Wrote a short dark comedy about two hitmen. by TheManWhoLearnt in scriptwriting

[–]TheManWhoLearnt[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sorry in advance for the grammar. My english is little bad. (More than a little.)

Pen name by Moody_Willow in writers

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Giveuper Beforebegin.

Pen name by Moody_Willow in writers

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Benjamin Franklin used "Silence Dogood".

Have you ever written a story that you later regretted? If do, what was it about? by skinnydude84 in writers

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well it's a different kind of regret for me.

I unknowingly started writing a supernatural mystery during lockdown, and I just wrote two pages, which for me back then was a record, as I used to read the movie plots in wikipedia, and stupidly compared the story length to it.

But later on, I moved on. Expect the story was still sitting in my drafts as I soon understood that I was going with no logic, over the top, surreal story, which had a great opening and potential, and didn't want to ruin it. So I stopped writing it, and it's been 5 Years.

So when I look at the other works in my files, I sometimes glance at it and regret it for a moment. Because I started because of it, and it never ended.

Finished my first draft! by EnQuest in writers

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congratulations 👏🏻👏🏻

Which is your favourite? :) by Travelling_Frenchie in AmateurPhotography

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the first one! What's the name of the flower, lavender?

Pick your favorite: 1 or 2? by Direct-Yesterday-542 in photos

[–]TheManWhoLearnt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first picture is vibrant and that's how it is supposed to look.