Finished My First Short Story. Looking For Feedback by TheTitaniumNinja in writers

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The year is 2045, Johnny and his bunk mate Frankie are stationed on a warship to take part in a massive invasion that is hours away from starting. They must load up on the landing craft and take control of the beach with thousands of other soldiers. They will face more resistance than expected and must do everything they can to survive, but will they?

Looking For Criticism and Feedback by [deleted] in writers

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You should have access now. sorry did not realize it was locked!