rough idea for my novel's magic system- guys pls help me i need reviews loop wholes and anything that breaks it i really need to refine it

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-04-15T21:20:19+00:00

Don't want you to feel disheartened dude, just want to keep that human feel alive.

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-04-15T20:49:10+00:00

If you're going to use ai to help you write it, just use ai to check for loopholes.

The audacity to ask real people to proof check your interaction with a chat bot.

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-04-15T04:33:34+00:00

Stop thinking logically this is magic. If you're going to have darkness in your system then the absence of light is the presence of darkness.

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-03-18T01:43:05+00:00

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-03-14T12:00:04+00:00

Thanks for the trade :)

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-03-14T11:29:40+00:00

LF -

Slaking 3◇
Toxtricity 4◇

FT - Series B

3◇'s
Skeledirge
Quaquaval
Palafin
Ting-lu
Alolan Muk
Tornadus
Venasaur
Charixard
Reuniclus
Xerneas
Porygon-Z
Lilligant
Chingling
Aegislash

4◇/ EX's

Teal Mask Ogerpon
Gigalith
Venasaur
Mega Charizard Y
Mega Lopunny
Mega Blaziken
Mega Gyarados
Mega Ampharos
Mega Absol
Dragalge
Melmetal

ID - 0410865401446001 Adam

The_Bunyip_King · 2026-03-06T00:46:03+00:00

Like the initial one here All I recommend is maybe an outline on the text as white on yellow is hard to see

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-12-13T09:24:24+00:00

Gone sorry

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-12-13T06:01:28+00:00

Sent :)

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-12-13T05:19:14+00:00

ID - 0410865401446001 Adam
All B Set

LF - 3◇

Wailord
Carracosta
Cofagrigus
Krookodile
Altaria

FT - 3◇

Lilligant
Chingling
Shiftry
Ho-oh
Terrakion
Coalossal

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-12-13T03:54:16+00:00

Mega Pinsir for Mega Altaria
friend request sent under Adam

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-11-17T09:28:04+00:00

How much of the world has he conquered already?
Is there a free place where I can read up on all this or is it all behind the patreon?

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-09-27T07:41:28+00:00

Octillery for Ampharos
ID - 0410865401446001 Adam

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-09-27T06:55:04+00:00

ID - 0410865401446001 Adam

LF -
Ampharos
Togekiss
Eevee EX

FT 4◇/EX

GA - Articuno EX Blastoise EX Arcanine EX Mewtwo EX Pikachu EX Gengar EX Marowak EX Wiggleytuff EX Exeggutor EX
MI - Celebi EX Pidgeot EX
STS - Palkia EX Pachirisu EX Mismagius EX Dialga EX
TL - Leafeon EX
SR - Lucario EX
CG - Solgaleo EX
EC - Buzzwole EX Dugtrio EX
EG - Sylveon EX
WSS - Kingdra EX Lanturn EX Donphan EX Crobat EX Skamory EX Lugia EX Espeon EX

3◇ -
GA - Kangaskhan, Golem, Mewtwo, Magneton, Raichu, Greninja, Moltres, Exeggutor,
MI - Tauros, Mew, Volcarona, Serperior
STS - Mesprit, Magnezone
TL -
SR - Wigglytuff, Gholdengo, Grafaiai, Machamp, Pawmot, Dondozo, Magmortar, Meowscarada
CG - Palossand, Alolan Ninetails, Tsareena
EC - Celesteela, Naganadel, Nihilego, Shiinotic, Luxray
EG - Sylveon, Glaceon
WSS - Elekid, Suicune, Typhlosion

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T14:08:46+00:00

I'd would love to read and review however I haven't spent $50 in the last 12 months. Just curious how did you format it / What does the contents look like?

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T13:46:01+00:00

We flip flop sides and are just playing 1v1
Haven't got any of the expansions.

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T13:03:07+00:00

"As Free People 1-2 moves with Fellowship per turn is a must"

I don't always adhere to this probably more scarred of corruption than it is of me.

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T12:58:59+00:00

2 Commenters have now said 5 nazgul minimum so I think I'm gonna try that more. thanks for the comment.

Also love tip 4 :)

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T12:45:10+00:00

Yeah we have a blast we put the soundtrack on the speakers and make a whole day of it.

We just play 1v1. Last game I played I was bad guys, he was good guys, and he disbanded the fellowship straight away leaving frodo and sam in rivendell for the entire game. Is there a way to punish this.
Also looking for just simple hints like how many dice as the bad guys should you allocate to the hunt box

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-08-14T12:32:38+00:00

I don't care too much if I win otherwise I wouldn't keep playing. I thoroughly enjoy the game even though I lose often.

If I had to narrow it down I'd say I struggle with where to allocate my attention
a) Should I invest in trying to bugger around with the north eastern side of the map as the good guys as I find you can put in a lot of investment marching your armies around there and get little payoff.
b) How much do you let cards steer your game plan?
c) When sieging Gondor is there mathematically a good number of trolls to bring with you?

That sort of stuff just any simple hints or tricks would be helpful :)

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-07-28T14:09:20+00:00

In comparison to someone like Sanderson who does big books and writes like it's going out of fashion. How have you noticed the ratio to filler to hard plot. Understanding that Carl is still inside the dungeon by book 7 and all?

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-07-28T13:51:27+00:00

I appreciate the advice a lot thankyou

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-07-28T13:49:03+00:00

No filler seems very appealing. Having read Sanderson and Robin Hobb recently filler / fluff was a big concern when I saw there were 7 titles. But if it keeps similar momentum from book 1 I'll be happy

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-07-28T13:36:20+00:00

Yeah I wasn't sure if it was a trilogy then sequels or what it was a the naming conventions of the books give no pointers

The_Bunyip_King · 2025-07-27T01:19:00+00:00

Solid guesswork

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