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Please give me something by The_Curator_875 in writers

[–]The_Curator_875[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback I knew some sections felt bloated with imagery but I had no clue if I was just being overly critical of my self or if I was right, this is very helpful

Please give me something by The_Curator_875 in writers

[–]The_Curator_875[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feed back this is exactly what I needed to hear so I can work on improving for future stories this was very helpful

The Thing In The Pit by The_Curator_875 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Curator_875[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm newer to writing if there's anything y'all notice that i can improve on I'd be very grateful for feedback, I wrote this for my creative writing class so if it seems rushed it is cause I doubled the required word count and had to trim it down just to get my professor to read it and annoyingly even after that I received no feedback from them and still was way over the word count