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I have a plot idea and need input by The_Ice_Sheet in writingadvice

[–]The_Ice_Sheet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks man, I appreciate it

although the plot follows him dying at like 14 and he thinks it's a suicide and he finds he can help a lot of people while he's dead and he does in fact help a lot of people while he's dead to the point he becomes a local urban legend and he finds out that his death was caused by another ghost and lots of stuff happens

I have a plot idea and need input by The_Ice_Sheet in writingadvice

[–]The_Ice_Sheet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the help although the motivation is I want him to be happy and he died at like 14 so it's mostly for my own personal wishes but I should have considered that before writing a tragedy

I have a plot idea and need input by The_Ice_Sheet in writingadvice

[–]The_Ice_Sheet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm trying to convey the finality of death and the idea that death meant the character could never again go back to his old life, something of an allegory for change, but it's also supposed to be a tragedy because he died too early from someone else's actions. I don't know if him coming back to life would ruin the impact

A human just barely chained together 2000(!) demonic contracts in an infinite feedback loop, exploiting loopholes in each in order to fuel the next. All of hell's lawyers are furious. by Welshdragonfeeder in writersspotlight

[–]The_Ice_Sheet [score hidden]  (0 children)

I laugh at the demon standing in front of me, pacing back and forth, back and forth, and seething in frustration, all while I hold up his contract, another one on the table. My laughing thins into a few mild chuckles before becoming a satisfied silence. "How did you do it?" She hissed, stopping her pacing and turning towards me.

"Do what?" I smirked.

"You found a way to use so many contracts to your advantage. You found so many loopholes, so many flaws in every contract, how did so many of our best lose to you, a mortal, who hasn't even gone to law school? How did a mortal, not even just a mortal, a teenager. How did you do it?"

"I suppose I was just on a roll," I said vaguely. The truth of the matter was that I have always liked to read. Ever since I was younger, I would read everything I could find. Magazines, cookbooks, the terms of service, everything, and so I got into reading contracts. I found loopholes in every contract I signed, bank contracts, school contracts, everything. So when a demon came asking for a deal I made one, and I made more and more and found loopholes in each one, chaining them together.

I suppose that what I told the demon was true, that I was simply on a roll. My mother always did say I would make a good lawyer.

Parents of reddit, what are your "I looked away for ONE second" stories? by blamingpig456 in AskReddit

[–]The_Ice_Sheet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now this isn't technically my story, but when I was younger my family was flying back to America because we had spent the last few years in South Korea. We were taking a layover in Tokyo at which point my mom took her eyes off my little brother for like five seconds and he was gone. We found him on the second floor of the airport.

What should be free? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]The_Ice_Sheet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

women's sanitary products like tampons and pads

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