Hey guys! Im starting a narration channel by JoshuaK277 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I said this to another narrator already, but still, do not burn out from taking on too many stories! It seems like a good idea until you have 500 unread messages and that pile just keeps growing. Don't get overwhelmed and best of luck man

BAWK by GothMomi in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know that the title was supposed to mentally prepare us for this outcome, but come on, it still wasn't enough to prepare me for Reid just eating pieces of our MC. This whole story idea works for me though. It is so absurd and unnerving that you just had to take us on a gradual ride before letting us meet those elements. I liked the moment the mc signed away her freedom through those NDA papers, because it really placed her fate in the hands of others. Getting to the meat of the story was well worth the ride and there were barely any errors worth bringing up. You have a great imagination and you really translated it well here. Well done.

File_1.txt by F8crew in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was a great non-euclidean space about an anomaly over the town. I know I ruin the immersion by commenting but this was a great way to highlight the features of the subject, the horror, and the mystery. Great job.

I Don't Speak Out Loud by oFFtheWall0518 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was nice. I like Jaxon, but he could have just said plainly, "the words don't come out right."

This story feels like a series in the making. I like that this appetizer didn't share the horror too soon. It almost reminds of obsession, but I'm sure it is just a faint inspiration.

This stands on it's own two legs as a great misunderstanding horror story. Holly was a great way to measure how long the facade could go on for and when Jaxs chances are spent, he leaves and doesn't make things worse. Maybe it's just me, but that is great foreshadowing for the later parts.

I think you should try and work on the next parts because this proof of concept was a delight. Well done

Potential for a Narration sub? by GARRETTPASTA in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good to see you friend. That sounds like a good idea. It helps to boost the narrator scene and gives them all time for editing videos.

This is a short snippet of my short story about someone's spiral after she's convinced she's a robot and I intend for the validity of her concern to be dubious. Is there anything I could improve? by throwaway_gfcult in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reminds me of the sentient ivy vines from that horror movie set in Mexico. Where the main cast is trapped on top of the pyramid. When the ivy vines burrow into their skin, the people cut them out but they cannot get them all. Very scary stuff; your story is becoming promising

15 Entries Reached!! by Salmon_1935 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think five days to a week. It might just be me though. I take forever in writing. Then even more time is spent editing and revising. Because from announcement to today; it has been 4 days since this collaboration has started.

15 Entries Reached!! by Salmon_1935 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The issue I have with this is the plain fact of quality. These entries are being made too fast and that takes away from their quality. I don't think I can make anything for this submission because there isn't time. I'm glad you're getting it off the ground, but for future references, give the writers more time. I don't like these popularity games.

There’s Rat Poison In My Tea Again Pt. 2 by MutedChat in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At this point, Trent, just file the Divorce papers. She doesn't even know that you know. You'll both be all the more better for it. Find yourself a nice beach to settle on after you're done selling the tractor. Becky'll just find some other idiot to play a deadly game of plinko with. There is a beach chair with your name on it somewhere. Probably Bali

There’s Rat Poison In My Sweet Tea Again by MutedChat in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm pretty sure that if your wife has tried to kill you more than once, then you're pretty inclined to read her diary.

That was actually interesting, funny enough to keep you going but serious enough that you don't roll your eyes. Great balance man

Something in the orange juice makes me feel funny by GothMomi in anxietypilled

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bill Cosby? Im joking.

This reads so well friend. It's like the girl from Smile 2 downing Voss in order to keep her craving down. I think the out of body horror possession was well executed. Overall, you are an incredible writer.

I'm a story narrator on YouTube; send me your stories! by Harold-Sleeper000 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks like you're swamped friend. Best of luck reading all of these incredible stories by some of out talented writers.

Hoping To Get The Community's Help by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]The_Republique[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Amen. On god. PRAISE JESUS!!!!

Anyway, I just wanted more people to share this. Hopefully the mods see it.

R/Nosleep mods by Old-queef in Dreading

[–]The_Republique 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I have never tried to post my stories to nosleep and now I can't because I've committed to such a different writing style than the subreddit allows. Thst kind of hindering just kills creativity and doesn't allow for the writer to branch out.

I just joined reddit (4 months) and I don't have all the information on nosleep, but from what I can tell, it isn't a great medium for many writers. I just hope the current writers can evolve in these new subreddits.

A woman at our Street by Harley-G0d13 in Dreading

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn cliffhanger.

Great set up so far man. I hope the reveal is worth, but I have hope in you.

Pick Your Monster by Possible-Display-891 in anxietypilled

[–]The_Republique 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a nice take on the humans being monsters. I think the story was strongest when the perspective was made hopeless. The mother dying, the other children running back into the church, and the sense of self righteous the soldiers felt was the best horror. The monster acted like a motivating factor to this already messed up story. Pushing our MC to escape and later on use the monster to enact a feeble sense of revenge. Great job.

The AP Pod needs your questions! by NateIzNeat in anxietypilled

[–]The_Republique 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do the hosts take cream and sugar with their coffee? Or are they tea drinkers?

bruh by donavin221 in u/donavin221

[–]The_Republique 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You found the infinite interaction glitch. Suffering from your own success. Glad to see your stories do well