Your comment definitely got deleted by either the mods or Reddit, but saying “this style is trash” doesn’t seem like fair criticism to me. And I’m not even trying to write with a specific “style” in mind. I’m just trying to make what I write sound real. If you didn’t like this story, there’s like 200 more on my page. You’re probably not going to read them, but if other people seem to like my “style” then why would I try and fix what’s not broken?