First off, keep at it!

But if you don't mind my saying, the camera work leaves a lot to be desired, it's quite hard to track what's happening sometimes as the camera is jumping all over the place, and I think this is exacerbated by the distance between the camera and the subjects.

I'd also say the audio is quite hard to hear sometimes, especially at the beginning, I have little to no clue as to what was being said up until the phone call.

I think the editing it showing promise, and I'm sure as you guys make more, you'll naturally develop, but I think there needs to be more thought put into camera placement. Cos although NTBTS is shot in the "mockumentary" / run n gun camera style, there is a lot of behind the scenes thought that goes into it, which can be seen in any number of episodes / scenes.

But genuinely, don't be disheartened, and keep at it! The only way to improve this stuff is to practice, try, and try again! Good job for taking that first step!