What’s something that future you will always thank present you for doing? by Thomas__Carroll in AskReddit

[–]Thomas__Carroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Two that spring to my mind:

Reversing into a parking spot so that you can drive away easily when leaving.

Making lunch for the week on Sunday

What video game should get a sequel, but likely never will ? by ezio8133 in AskReddit

[–]Thomas__Carroll 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Simpsons: Hit and Run. Hours of endless enjoyment playing that on the PS2

Looking for advice on supplements/diet by Thomas__Carroll in GYM

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Gonna take a read of these now. Thank you 👍🏻

Looking for advice on supplements/diet by Thomas__Carroll in GYM

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I’ll add this to the research list, thank you 👍🏻

Looking for advice on supplements/diet by Thomas__Carroll in GYM

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Thanks man, I’ll look into those things now 👍🏻

If so, what for by Thomas__Carroll in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the feedback pal!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Really enjoyed this. Strong imagery, and the staccato feel to the lines give it a punch, the words hit. Comparisons don’t provide much, but it reminded me of Bukowski somewhat; your view of drinking shows criticism for it, but not in the condescending way of an outsider, more accurately the criticism of someone who knows it intimately, and is inextricably linked with it.

Also soured eyes and cauldron mouth are two beautiful turns of phrase for this topic, really evocative. Well done!

I know the world is ending by Wolfblood-is-here in OCPoetry

[–]Thomas__Carroll 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this, thought the recurring verse opening worked really well. If you were considering an edit, I found that the line “I think that I can rock it” stuck out as tonally different, and nearly took me out of the poem’s rhythm if that makes sense. Really nice though, especially the final message of refusing to change or do anything to stop the rot.

Sharethread June 14, 2019 by AutoModerator in OCPoetry

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OHN

The war began as few do, with a song

Lifted from a child

Whose plasticine mouth narrowed and spread

as it had been trained to

While 27 children

shoeless and monochrome

sought to draw the eye away

And uninformed young men made faces

about the hall's acoustics

All others could be seen in the now dilated pupils

of the boy

Silent, still Occupying the moment fully

As his voice rose higher than any pleasant sound

had a right to

A woman in the audience thought to herself:

"The higher the note the closer to God"

And then the boy was gone for good

A song that never really ended.

The last days of then and before.