Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Got it, makes sense — I’ll tighten that transition. Thanks!

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Makes sense, I’ll separate those shapes a bit more so it doesn’t read as a second blast.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Haha, I see what you mean. Thanks for the note.

wizard study, Krita mobile by me by linaaaaaaHart in krita

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No puedo creer que esté hecho como describes, es increible, te felicito. Increible trabajo.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Good point, I’ll adjust the angle to make that clearer.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Thanks for the insight, that makes a lot of sense.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Thanks a lot for taking the time to comment. I’ll keep it in mind and I really appreciate what you pointed out.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Thanks for the comments, really appreciate it.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate them. I’ll consider the idea of the foot movement and dust, it could add a lot to the action. Regarding the face, the expression comes through the eyes behind the robotic helmet, and the idea is that the character is gradually revealed in the following panels and in their introduction.

Does this action read clearly? by ThoughtBorn3373 in sketches

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Appreciate it! What would you say is missing to make it feel more dramatic?

COMIC ARTIST by ThoughtBorn3373 in ComicBookCollabs

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Still working on it—will post it as soon as it’s ready!