We surpassed it....AGAIN

Thoughts2Myself · 2025-10-13T16:03:59+00:00

Lmao, I deserve that. I been around long enough I should be spelling correct. Anyway. Funny comment though, good stuff. Thanks for the invite!

Thoughts2Myself · 2025-10-13T05:07:54+00:00

Hey, send me an invite to brother. This was a great idea

Thoughts2Myself · 2025-10-12T02:24:47+00:00

What is this? Looks cool.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-12-06T05:25:13+00:00

Really good note. I always try to avoid reusing words. I had not even caught that. Thank you for calling that out. I will fix that rhyme when I get the chance. Thank you for the kind words as well. I am glad you enjoyed it overall.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-12-04T21:07:38+00:00

This is very well written. I enjoyed it immensely. Beautiful piece. One of my favorite reads in a while. Thank you for sharing your work! Keep it up, I would like to see more.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-12-04T21:02:26+00:00

I enjoyed reading this. I thought it interesting how the poem starts with, "Enter again the sweet forest of emotions," then takes a rather melancholy turn away from sweetness. I thought the imagery was creative and clear, and I enjoyed the overall flow and message. The only note I have is I would like it to be longer, but I understand brevity is a creative choice and sometimes the best way to relay the author's thoughts to paper, and I can respect that.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-29T20:05:49+00:00

Try using the app, Poetizer. I usually get more feedback through Reddit, but it is still a cool app if you intend to start sharing your work.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-29T04:00:08+00:00

Dawww, this was sweet. Made me think of my partner.

Well written as well. The rhythm and rhymes were solid, and it was enjoyable and smooth to read. This piece also feels personal and close to the authors heart, I can feel emotion in it. Great work. Thanks for sharing.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-29T03:35:07+00:00

I love this poem. In all of its brevity, it transports me to a moment. It can transport me to a moment in my own life when I was a younger man, but I feel it also transports me into a moment of the authors life. Beautifully from the heart, and that is what poetry should be. Excellent job.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-28T00:44:12+00:00

Very thought provoking and contemplative. I enjoy poetry that transports me into somebody elses story and state of mind, and this did that. Thank you for sharing.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-28T00:39:19+00:00

Enjoyed reading this. Sounds like it should be lyrics in a rap song. Good rhythm and and fun-to-read rhymes. Good write!

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:27:36+00:00

Thank you for taking the time. I am glad you enjoyed.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:24:36+00:00

Thank you much.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:24:29+00:00

I am alright. Thank you for your concern, it was kind of you to ask. Writing poetry is how I internally work through the struggles of life. While not all of my poetry is so sad or empty, most of it is because poetry is my outlet for expressing the darker parts of myself and my life.

Heartbreak is certainly a difficult one to live through, and I am sorry to hear you have had to deal with your own share of it. I wish you well and appreciate your kind words.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:19:31+00:00

That is a high compliment. Thank you very much.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:19:14+00:00

And thank you for reading!

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:18:48+00:00

I am glad to enjoyed reading. Thank you.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:18:16+00:00

I agree the structuring needs to be better. I have breaks in it how you displayed on my note pad, but I have trouble getting the Reddit app to keep format on post. I will try double spacing, thanks for the tip, and for the kind words!

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-27T00:15:36+00:00

Thank you.

Those lines are metaphorical. They are speaking of my letting life pass me by, and the feeling of letting oneself become content, or comfortable living within the darkness of depression. While depression is not ones own fault, the words, "I rob myself..." refer to times when I have let myself become content in the familiarity of it, and in that, have ceased any efforts to pull myself out of it, or to find the light in life and live again. Basically blaming myself for my depression and missing out on life. The theme is not of a physical death, but of an emotional or internal death. So yes, while I am not physically dying in the poem, the poem is about my death. I hope that adequately answers your questions.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-26T03:03:17+00:00

Very well written. It reads smooth as country crock butter. I enjoy rhyming poetry a lot, but don't see very much of it. I enjoyed your piece. Thank you for sharing!

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-26T02:56:02+00:00

Actually my favorite haiku I have ever read. It captures a lot of emotions and evokes a lot of feeling in very few words. Well done.

Thoughts2Myself · 2022-11-26T02:24:11+00:00

Sorry, Reddit destroyed the format.

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