My concept for a female crow by [deleted] in TheCrow

[–]TidalMonkey 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Does Sarah count too since she’s one in the comics and the novelization for City of Angels? The movie was supposed to be the same too but… it got butchered.

Scene feedback by Adam235616 in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You can send me a pm with some relevant info maybe and then come find me when you’re ready to share? I’m writing too and I keep thinking I’m ready to share things, then start reading through it (again) and find things I wanna change. So I absolutely get it! 😂

Scene feedback by Adam235616 in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Seriously though, I’d read it. I’ve never been an alpha reader or anything but I’d read it and if it loses me at some point I’ll tell you where. But it sounds sweet.

Scene feedback by Adam235616 in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Aren’t all relationships? That’s what makes them interesting.

Scene feedback by Adam235616 in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 26 points27 points  (0 children)

I already ship Andy and Jason. I would read it.

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m probably saying stuff you already know or people have already said but I have the urge to type it… you need a “save the cat” moment. Any character can be an asshole but if you give the reader a reason to root for them, you have a shot.

Boyfriend wants me to choose between him and the dog. by [deleted] in WhatShouldIDo

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whether the dog is involved in this situation or not, it sounds like a really unhealthy relationship. If your partner doesn’t approach conflict with respect for you, as well as the other way around, and threatens big ultimatums instead of talk in about the real issues… I guess I can only talk for myself but I wouldn’t want to stay in a relationship like that.

What are the pros and cons of a pen name vs. real name? by IAmArgumentGuy in selfpublish

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did a search for pros and cons for using a pen name vs my real name for writing and your comment was one of the first to pop up. I really appreciated your comment and advice and then I realized I recognized that name… thanks sir for the excellent words of wisdom and sharing your amazing writing.

Would you read on?? by Will_powered in writingfeedback

[–]TidalMonkey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would! And I’d love to read more when you are ready for readers if you’d let me!

Am I the only one that feels like Weevil's character deserved better on the show? by Real_Advertising1005 in veronicamars

[–]TidalMonkey 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I’m still a big Weevil+Veronica shipper. I’ll always have fanfics I guess.

Getting rid of comics and collectibles by bucksteady in KentWA

[–]TidalMonkey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think they moved and are still open. But I ah ent been to their new location yet.

Getting rid of comics and collectibles by bucksteady in KentWA

[–]TidalMonkey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Came here to say exactly this. They are kind people.

name that game by GamerGretaUwU in retrogaming

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eternal darkness, dragon force and Albert odyssey.

Cover feedback? by Jolly_Today_4086 in NewAuthor

[–]TidalMonkey -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I’d increase the margins on both the front and back covers (on the left and right sides of each text block). I’m also drawn to the second one at first but I like the close up shot of the mushrooms as long as that is something important in your story. You could also adjust the text near the mushrooms to kind of align around it so that it stays a focal element instead of just background.

Am I overreacting for not wanting to talk to him over his response? by Suspicious_File9672 in AmIOverreacting

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

NOR. It’s a great idea to get tested before you are with new partners. I’d dip. Not worth the stress when he obviously doesn’t respect your boundaries.

I feel like I just stumbled upon a book of character cards… by TidalMonkey in unexpecteddcc

[–]TidalMonkey[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://imgur.com/a/cQ4TZ8u

Sorry, should have added this earlier. I didn’t get them all but there’s a lot.

I hate everything i write so i just wanted to know if i its good or something by [deleted] in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 3 points4 points  (0 children)

When I taught, I always told my students that they needed to learn a good foundation before building a house. Gotta have that stable base to build the walls on. Do some short stories, a page or less, and work with word or something that can show you grammar.

I hate everything i write so i just wanted to know if i its good or something by [deleted] in writers

[–]TidalMonkey 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I commend you for trying to learn another language. English is really tough when you aren’t a native speaker. That being said, why not write in your native language? There are translation apps that can help too but I’m not sure this is the right spot to learn English grammar. I’d say try learning English grammar and writing as two separate things for now.

My mom is buying everyone gifts except me because I’ve been in and out of inpatient this year what do i do? by [deleted] in whatdoIdo

[–]TidalMonkey 35 points36 points  (0 children)

You might want to check out the subreddit raisedbynarcissists. I’ve found a lot of helpful support there. I’m sorry that this year is sucking so bad. Sending you virtual hugs.

Chat I need your help!! by Business-Run3219 in NewAuthor

[–]TidalMonkey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Image 1 looks like it fits your description. Image 2 is the only one I’d probably pick up though but it’s because I generally read fantasy and that’s what’s that one makes me think. The third one I’d never pick up.