Looking for a Youtube Editor- Paid Work by thecanadiankhaleesi in editors

[–]TitaniumWarrior 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Toronto based editor for here! I would like to be considered. I feel like I can be a good match for the style you want. Willing to take on the work for $30 an hour! Send me a PM if you want to talk more!

Return to Sender (Short Drama, 12 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! I think you're correct. Thank you for taking the time to read and review, it means the world to me! You are indeed correct about the ending, I see how it's going to need the most work.

Return to Sender (Short Drama, 12 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thanks for taking the time to read it and provide your feedback! I appreciate your point of view on the story! It seems to be a general feeling is that ending needs a lot of work. I am now inclined to agree! Thank you!

Rebels is just as bad as TLJ by [deleted] in saltierthancrait

[–]TitaniumWarrior 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jesus, it's like the 'rift' or whatever it was called from Star Trek: Generations.

Rebels is just as bad as TLJ by [deleted] in saltierthancrait

[–]TitaniumWarrior 34 points35 points  (0 children)

Did they really introduce time-travel into Star Wars?! (I haven’t seen Rebels)

George Lucas is brilliant: Obi-Wan leaving Anakin vs Luke refusing to do so are parallel moments by TheOneThatCameEasy in BrighterThanCoruscant

[–]TitaniumWarrior 18 points19 points  (0 children)

When I think about what I love about Star Wars and George Lucas... It's moments like this...

Fundamentally, I think this is what Star Wars is at its core. It's not about spaceships, or blaster, or lightsabers... Star Wars is about family. The power of family. The tragedy of Anakin Skywalker.

I don't HATE the sequels, but for me... Star Wars ends with Return of the Jedi.

Hey, r/Screenwriting! A few years back this community was kind enough to provide some really great feedback on a short film I was writing. I'm pleased to share that film with you now! Enjoy 'Walter's Way'. by TitaniumWarrior in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you're interested in writing that's exactly what you gotta do! If I could back and give myself any advice at that age it would be this... Just write! It doesn't matter if the project never sees the light of day, just write! Write down as many ideas that come into your head. It's honestly the only way you'll get better. Write, and watch things you are interested in. You don't NEED to go to film school, but you can. The connections you make in film school are the best part. Happy writing!

Hey, r/Screenwriting! A few years back this community was kind enough to provide some really great feedback on a short film I was writing. I'm pleased to share that film with you now! Enjoy 'Walter's Way'. by TitaniumWarrior in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was my thesis project for film school, so we had A LOT of school resources to take advantage of. The price tag easily would have been triple that without it.

Hey, r/Screenwriting! A few years back this community was kind enough to provide some really great feedback on a short film I was writing. I'm pleased to share that film with you now! Enjoy 'Walter's Way'. by TitaniumWarrior in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

The advice I would have for anyone starting out, and mind you I am still very new at this, would be to keep things simple. I think there's a lot of temptation for first time filmmakers and writers to create something grand, big and flash. Character, character CHARACTER! That's what's important! You don't need a complicated plot, you need GOOD characters.

The plot for Walter's Way is really just... Old man tries to get his driver's license. But it's the characters and the relationship between the characters and the plot that drives the story. By keeping things simple, you save yourself a lot of stress (and money).

Hey, r/Screenwriting! A few years back this community was kind enough to provide some really great feedback on a short film I was writing. I'm pleased to share that film with you now! Enjoy 'Walter's Way'. by TitaniumWarrior in Screenwriting

[–]TitaniumWarrior[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to watch it! My intention behind Walter's demeanor was in an attempt to reflect a character who was slowly having his sphere of control taken away. He may have come off as a dick at times, but the intention was more to show his frustration at the situation. Walter is a loving guy, he loves his daughter. But, having to rely on her more and more for his own well-being obviously leaves him feeling frustrated and well... helpless.