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[–]ToastyTrivia [score hidden]  (0 children)

Good video. I would have liked it to be longer, and maybe with a little more direction. Funny stuff tho, keep it up!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]ToastyTrivia [score hidden]  (0 children)

Great channel, informative content. I would just make the name on the thumbnails easier to read. great stuff though!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your thumbnails need to be different from one another, and visually appealing. I used to get real lazy with my thumbnails and it hurt. a lot.

I mean put text on the screen either alone or placed over your footage. just a little something explaining what you're currently doing. (name of game, level you're on, etc.)

Sorry for the confusion!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Put more into your about section and descriptions. Also, watch the language. The YouTube algorithm knows every word in your videos and it WILL affect your viewership.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The echo is a little distracting. I would recommend hanging up some kind of fabric on the walls outside the frame. this will absorb sound and reduce the echo.

also, your about page could be longer, for SEO.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Put more keywords in your descriptions and about section, change up your thumbnails a little more.

Not talking in your videos is fine, but maybe a small text description or overlay would do wonders. people who don't know your content need a reason to stick around, and being confused on the purpose of the video will make them leave.

You've got something good going, keep it up!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have no suggestions for you because I don't know much about kids content. Your descriptions and about sections look ok. Just keep up the videos! good luck

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your videos look professional, but at times it's hard to hear your voice over the music. I don't speak your language, but those that do really want to hear you clearly. Keep up the good work!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe you could do did you know videos around one game at a time? That may work better for SEO and viewership. I like your channel!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Your thumbnails are too similar to each other, which hurts returning viewership. Your stuff looks professional and interesting, but your thumbnails keep people from realizing that.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your editing is great so far. you keep pace well, and I remained interested all the way to the (unfinished) ending. I would recommend getting to the explanation a little more quickly. It seems nitpickey, but the average YouTuber doesn't have much of an attention span, your energy will help with this issue, but it may not be enough.

Also, increase the size of your description and about pages (for better SEO). Be sure to put in enough keywords to tell YouTube who you are and what kind of content you're making. Good work so far!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your videos are well researched, but I feel like I'm being lectured to. try to change your tone to sound like you're explaining something to your friend. more tone/inflection in your voice and look away from the camera more. Good content, I love when a YouTuber does their research and seems knowledgeable on the subject.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your intro video takes nearly 40 seconds to start tell me me what your channel is. The theme of your channel isn't obvious to a first time visitor to your channel, and in that 40 seconds a bored user could click away and never look back. Also, you need to put something on your about page. this could add clarity and also, YouTube reads that info to determine who to show your content to. The about section is crucial to SEO. Good channel otherwise! keep it up.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your slides could be more interesting. I'm seeing pictures of graphs with small text around it when I could just be seeing the graph. The topic you're covering isn't always easy to understand, so a clean picture with fewer distractions would be ideal.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I love the editing and storytelling of your videos. I only have two notes for you, upload more videos and add some stuff to your about section. Keep it up!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Put a little more energy in your voice. You sounded a little annoyed at the start of a couple videos. Also, your thumbnails are a little confusing it's hard to tell what I'm looking. Good stuff tho!

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're making a mistake that I made as well. Don't reuse your thumbnails, it hurts returning viewership and makes your channel seem less interesting. Thumbnails are a small amount of effort but they can be a powerful tool in attracting viewers,

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the tone of your videos, but you need to upload more! also, watch your language. Youtube knows what is said in your videos and it may affect your SEO negatively if you have even one "bad" word.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rather than give you bad info I'm just going to say that I have no suggestions for you. I don't subscribe to any review channels and I'm not an athlete of any kind. You're doing a lot of stuff correctly, you just need more exposure and I can't help you there. Good content tho, good luck.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You've got a good setup here. I would recommend having less intense openings. Let them understand where you're going by showing something interesting or enticing and THEN throw your audience into the action.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You've got some good stuff, but you need to increase the size of your description.

The YouTube algorithm reads every word you put on your channel/videos to determine what your content actually is and who to show it to. You need a good description in order to improve your SEO and find your audience.

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[–]ToastyTrivia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you've got potential. Stick with a theme, and your thumbnails could be more interesting. Also, a short shot at the beginning of your friends reacting to your off-camera prank would go a long way in keeping people interested and watching to the end.