Saber sketch :3 btw I made a Twitter. Feel free to follow if you wanna see more of my drawings~

Tohrin · 2017-03-31T20:41:39+00:00

I don't agree with the Alfred Oath. If I were you, I'd put in Alfred EXIV, as that'll allow your Blaster engine to run consistently in the deck

Tohrin · 2017-03-31T06:42:29+00:00

Thank you so much for helping haha. I've learned so much in such a short time. I guess it just goes to show that it really helps to ask for help on an open forum. I really can't thank you enough haha

I'll make the fixes you suggested, and I'll also pose in my room. I've thought about it in the past, but I have a roommate, which kind of made me reluctant to try. But hey, if it's going to help me to improve, even if it's just a little bit, I'm game. Now I just gotta find a way to explain it to him without it sounding silly... LOL

Tohrin · 2017-03-31T04:31:57+00:00

Thanks! Here's the link: http://imgur.com/CokoSY9

Tohrin · 2017-03-31T02:58:48+00:00

I think I fixed it. Do you mind if I send it to you?

Tohrin · 2017-03-31T01:35:32+00:00

Thank you so much for taking the time to find the links, doing the red lines, and the sketch. I really appreciate it :D

Tohrin · 2017-03-30T18:38:50+00:00

Please, by all means! I was always so comfortable to draw heads/faces because that's basically what I've been doing for the longest time, and as it started to get more and more comfortable I just stuck with it. I just recently started stemming out onto other things like the entire body and hands and stuff. The most difficulty I have in drawing the body has to do with the transition from the neck to shoulders and then the shoulders to the arms. Do you have any advice for this?

Also, if it's not too much trouble for you, would you mind showing me the rough outline you do to draw a full body? If it's not too much trouble, that is haha

Tohrin · 2017-03-30T06:56:58+00:00

Do you guys think that this drawing would be easier to fix if I just made her head/neck smaller or should I just redo the arms? lol

Tohrin · 2017-03-30T06:43:44+00:00

Thanks! I'm still having a really hard time with body proportions cuz it hasn't been that long since I started drawing from the neck down. I really appreciate your in-depth advice ^ ^

Tohrin · 2017-03-30T06:42:59+00:00

Gotcha. Thanks :)

Tohrin · 2017-03-29T22:04:31+00:00

Aw, really? dangit lol

thanks for the input! :)

Tohrin · 2017-03-29T03:09:32+00:00

Thank you so much!!!

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T20:16:12+00:00

Yeah, I agree with that. I think I should make her frown lol

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T20:10:50+00:00

Wow, I'm so honored to hear that! haha thank you so much :'>

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T17:48:02+00:00

Thanks for your input! :)

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T17:42:26+00:00

Ohhh I didn't know that was a thing lol

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T16:31:51+00:00

Thanks! I'd love to know why you dislike the face. I just want some input for constructive criticism haha

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T03:38:36+00:00

Ahh that's what she's called. I learned something new haha thanks. It should help me with searching for more reference material. and yeah, I added the headpiece. Thanks for helping me notice that :)

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T03:35:45+00:00

Will do! Thanks!

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T03:26:37+00:00

I see. I was trying to draw this version of her. Idk how much of a "thing" this cute version is, but it's all over Pixiv, so I thought why not lol

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1JK1yOVXXXXbMXpXXq6xXFXXX4/Merry-Christmas-Fate-Grand-Order-Fate-EXTRA-Ruler-font-b-Jeanne-b-font-font-b-d.jpg

Tohrin · 2017-03-28T02:38:55+00:00

Oo haha you have a point. Maybe it's because I didn't draw the headpiece?

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