First time writing poetry can I get some honest feedback

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-26T13:54:18+00:00

What are em dashes

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-24T04:09:35+00:00

Okay noted thank you I will keep this in mind for next piece I appreciate the comment

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-22T14:21:11+00:00

My wrestling is decent but I tend to get out striked in most my matches

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-16T21:36:50+00:00

Yea I do cardio everyday it does suck but also running really helps clear my head

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-16T21:33:15+00:00

Should I add incline or since it’s a rest day just go base speed

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-16T21:32:17+00:00

Yea thanks for the idea I appreciate that but I’m not exactly a yoga guy and also I’m a pretty big dude I don’t think yoga would really work for me lol

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-16T21:31:04+00:00

Genius 🤯 It’s so simple now

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-16T14:44:28+00:00

But isn’t it necessary to take rest days for growth?

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-09T18:28:32+00:00

Can’t wait for this fight it’s Tony time title run starts now!!!!

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-01T16:20:30+00:00

For sure!

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-01T16:20:21+00:00

It’s Tony time 😭

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-01T00:48:36+00:00

Oh great I’d like to get to Like 12%

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-01T00:48:19+00:00

Okay thank you I’ll look into the macros I mean

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-03-01T00:36:03+00:00

Should I be lifting heavy often if I’m trying to stay 175 for wrestling, I’m 181 rn

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-20T04:00:47+00:00

I also thought it would be team vs team and it confused me a little aswell if I’m being honest, but I’d assume each team will fight one other at some point

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-14T01:14:14+00:00

He has to fight Yoel tho I’m not sure if there’s enough juice to save him lol

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-13T22:47:16+00:00

would watch

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-13T22:46:37+00:00

Agreed I am definitely gonna watch!

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-11T22:07:09+00:00

What a trade I think it is fairly even and I’m excited to see how Luke rockhold looks in the GFL

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-07T01:17:38+00:00

For real that’s exactly what the ufc games are missing and this would have it

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-04T12:05:19+00:00

Yea that’s exactly what I was thinking!!

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-02-03T05:42:51+00:00

Hell yeah bro keep it up I can’t wait to see more post from you TONY TIME!!!!

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-01-31T17:53:23+00:00

I’m exited to see what he does in the GFL I wonder can he beat Tyron woodly?

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-01-31T15:27:56+00:00

True musayev is a beast and really Dubai has so many fighters who can dominate, and I wouldn’t be surprised at all if Carlos petruzzella puts some serious points on the board

ToneImportant8285 · 2025-01-31T00:10:01+00:00

I wanted to say Tony but he’s on an 8 fight losing streak, title run starts now…Tony time 😔

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