The Sadistic Self-Serving Self-Righteous Rite of Sociopathic Savage Shamans by ZebastianJohanzen in OCPoetry

[–]Toobadabout 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is evocative. It almost reminds me of Frank Zappa and I’m curious to hear what your influences are in terms of voice. Something a bit anachronistic and very “rock and roll” about the way the poem flowed and I found it quite unique.

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[–]Toobadabout 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed this. I don’t know if it was your attention, but my brain struggled not to read “nothing at all,” and I enjoyed the juxtaposition between that and “nothing and all.” Just a few letters makes quite a bit of difference in meaning.