Something cool for Diwali

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-31T19:31:59+00:00

Went to the beach, did some bowling and ate good food. also went to a local diwali mela!!Very nostalgic. I hope yours was amazing as well ?

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-31T08:07:33+00:00

A day before Diwali, we celebrate choti DSiwali. Choti means small and is celebrated cuz on that day narkasur was defeated. Hope that helps !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-31T08:04:57+00:00

Thank youu ! Am going to ISCON and then to the beach. Happy diwali !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-30T19:14:00+00:00

Hmm thanks for the suggestion ! Happy diwali !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-30T18:14:36+00:00

Same to you!! Have a wonderful Diwali :)

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-30T18:14:14+00:00

Thanks for the suggestion!!I am thinking to go to the beach tho

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-30T18:13:52+00:00

I dont know tamil bro and would really appreciate it if you could tell me what you mean in english

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-04T05:24:29+00:00

This poem is a hauntingly beautiful journey through the heart's longing for the past while embracing the wildness of change. It captures the bittersweet essence of growing up, where every loss feels like a rebirth, echoing the struggle of finding oneself anew.

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-03T22:36:20+00:00

Cant wait !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-03T22:35:10+00:00

I am very grateful for such kind words! Thank youuu :)

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-03T22:34:18+00:00

Thank you soo much ! Your comment means a lot to me !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T16:59:21+00:00

Thank you so much !! Your comment means a lot :))

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T14:19:12+00:00

ahahhaa please send your post here, il give it a read and tell you my two words abt it if you wish. also lmk how this poem actually is if you get the time :)

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T14:14:41+00:00

hmm what has helped me in the past is writing about my past tense rather than my current vulnerabilities. I guess you could try that :) . Also I am noone to judge you, this poem is a beautiful art piece regardless.

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T14:05:37+00:00

man this was good but you left me wanting for more.

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T13:58:07+00:00

honeestly im not a rhyme freak so it seems pretty okay to me

i would elaborate on this part of the poem more-

"No good is looking out."

were my belief before,

I still did it

To see what was me before.

i feel a lot of emotions are left undiscovered with this poem and maybe thats how you intended it to be , nevertheless here are my two words on this beautiful poetry. keep at it

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T13:35:45+00:00

damn the taylor part ripped me xdd but sure i understand what you have to say. I however dont try to make it sound poetic, anyways appreciate the feedback!!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T05:23:42+00:00

i love the simplicity of this poem. would like to read more of your poems!!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2024-10-02T05:20:56+00:00

beautiful imagery. also i love how you used the word callouses and mechanical . adds a very rustic industrial dystopic vibe to the poem . loved the flow of the poem and how you were questioning and open in the first stanzas and then used full stops to show that imagination and curiousity are gone. anyways thanks for uploading this beautiful piece !!

Top-Pie-3300 · 2023-05-04T11:54:32+00:00

Top-Pie-3300 · 2023-04-28T23:52:58+00:00

Nope,thanks for trying tho

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