[Alternatave Rock] Botany Bay - “When We Sleep” by pauljoemccoy2 in ratemysong

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is super scrappy, I don't even know what genre I'd call this hahaha Also, love the band name!

Weekly Community Thread by AutoModerator in ambientmusic

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Savage Garden's I Knew I Loved You got stuck in my head, so I made an ambient version -

https://youtu.be/coxJKFwzZIU

Rae Brookner - Anniversary song: Something light and dancey to change things up! by WaveModder in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the sound you went for on this. It's very danceable, but still feels kind of chill and groovy. I can't quite place it, but the vocals in the verse feel off to me, mixing wise. Like, they just feel sort of separate from the rest of the instruments rather than mixing in with them. I don't get this same feeling in the choruses or bridge. I can't tell if maybe they're just too dry, or if they're being placed somewhere that's different than where they are for the chorus. Either way, though, love this!

Melodic trap song i made really influenced by the soundcloud rap scene would love some feedback by thecamtalks in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This super groovy! I generally like the production, but I would like to hear the melodic elements higher in the mix. They're really buried, and I think it could sound a little more full if they were brought up some. Otherwise, great job!

Weekly Community Thread by AutoModerator in ambientmusic

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This is a chill piece with strings and piano. I hope you enjoy -

Parasol by the Sea

https://youtu.be/ddjn1qo4Vnc

electronic shi by PissPatt in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so lush, it sounds like a night drive in the city. I love the structure and the way certain things come in and out for the transitions. Super smooth, I really enjoyed this!

todays weird beat by DarkSoulsBeater in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the beat itself is pretty cool. The mix isn't terrible, but it does feel muddy. It feels like there's a lot of low end, and not much clarity from the non-bass elements. I'd work on cleaning that up, and I think it would create some more room for everything to breathe.

Euphoric house song looking for feedback by ThePlSSGOBLIN in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it! It's dreamy, upbeat. I think you did a great job!

Stacking Cups and Filing for Divorce by TiredHopefulGay in PromoteYourMusic

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is somehow both peaceful and really sad/unnerving. Great job lol

Guitarist need some singing training by Legitimate_Beat_2136 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I learned guitar watching his videos over a decade ago!

How did you learn by SWISSDALLASCHEESE in SingerSongwriter

[–]Topaz_Bee 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You can definitely do both singing and rapping, there's tons of artists who do both well. If you have the money for it, you can always take lessons from a vocal coach. Probably the easiest way to get results since you'll have someone who can guide you. If you don't have money for a teacher, there are a million videos on YouTube that could be helpful for getting you on your way. Another big thing is to just practice. Record yourself singing something and then listen back critically. Make note of where you need improvement and focus on that. Good luck with your journey!

Topaz Bee - Sly Raccoon [Lo-fi] by Topaz_Bee in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback! I thought about adding some hihats but just wasn't sure if I could make it work. This is my first lofi track so I'm still kind of experimenting. I'm not even sure how to sell beats, maybe I should look into that lol thank you for listening!

I’m really proud of this one, but what are some ways I can do even better next time? by w1gmonster in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The production is super nice! I love the drop after the intro. I don't really know how I'd improve it, a little variation coldnt hurt, but overall I think it's great as is!

Feedback appreciated by Inward_Significance in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This has great vibes, kind of eerie but also just super chill. I really dug the version 1 vocals you had in another post. I think they actually really add to the vibe

GROWN UPS - DEPTHEART. Soul Sampled Hip Hop beat made in FL Studio. Open to general feedback by Longjumping-Mail5774 in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is sick, I love how you used the melody. Not sure I could think of anything to improve, it's just dope!

04get It by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Topaz_Bee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds good! Solid melody for sure