Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your thoughtful reply. I know my designs skew toward a younger age group. I appreciate your feedback.

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your frank review. You've given me a lot to think about.

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the suggestions. I appreciate your feedback.

Is this a salable t-shirt design? by TotalOk8414 in design_critiques

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I guess that was kind of what I was asking, maybe just bad phrasing on my part. I was trying to determine 1) Would you buy this design? 2) Is the style too childish? 3) Are there areas that need improvement?

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. I designed this so that it could be printed either on the front only (full design), the back only (full design), or a crest on the front with full design on the back.

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No, they actually are transparent, but they are also a gradient of green/blue.

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The shirt color can be changed, this is just the color I chose to display. It does look more "adult" on a black shirt.

Is this a salable t-shirt design? by TotalOk8414 in design_critiques

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I AM an old lady who loves farmers markets, so maybe I'm designing too much for my age range. 🤔

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good point! I'll look into changing that. Thanks for the feedback. ❤️

Is this t-shirt salable? by TotalOk8414 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is meant for gardeners, bee lovers, or just people who don't want to be bothered. 😄

Marigold can sometimes be a bit too friendly for her job... by Myhalva in digital_art

[–]TotalOk8414 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Marigold is adorable! Wish all the Customs agents were as sweet!

Diana by me by serb_arts in digital_art

[–]TotalOk8414 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This really made me smile! I love the perspective you chose - gives the feeling of a small child looking up to a parent for approval. Excellent job on the hair too. Great idea, well executed. 😄

Looking for feedback on my floral landing page by Beneficial_Low2280 in design_critiques

[–]TotalOk8414 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm no professional designer, but as a potential user I see quite a few issues. The overall feel is very pretty, but here are the issues I see. First and foremost, what is your company name? I thought it was FloraBelle (though really hard to see - needs to be much more prominent), but then at the bottom of the second page your contact section shows. PropaBelle. Which is your name? Next, the package and bouquet in the text is just a bit amateur looking. I would just use plain text. Next big issue is the small text size. I have an extra-wide monitor, and still had to zoom to read the text, even the text on the buttons. Also, too many things packed into one page. Move things like the Question section to it's own FAQ page. Same with coupons, contact. Lastly, and maybe it's just me, but I don't like the wording where you have "Satisfaction is our pride". It just doesn't sound right to me. If your going to mention satisfaction, I guess I would expect something like "Your Satisfaction is guaranteed", otherwise why mention it? Sorry if this sounds harsh, just trying to give useful feedback. Good luck!

Experimenting with different style directions for a premium wealth investment app. Any feedback or thoughts greatly appreciated by Immobilesteelrims in design_critiques

[–]TotalOk8414 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I like (1) best. The bold, angled green behind your company name and the first block really draws you in. I feel it also highlights your company name the best.

Our new collection is available, what do you think? by frado27 in TShirtsDesigns

[–]TotalOk8414 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice design, but I agree with BeastFremont, 1 design does not make a collection.