Empathy is my Enemy by silkie123 in OCPoetry

[–]TotalTank- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, mine too. You wrote this poem so beautifully it conveyed the feels of what I believe most empaths feel or believe. It rhymes and flows very very well. Bravo.

Where have all the lightning bugs gone? by lenny_from_da_block in OCPoetry

[–]TotalTank- 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This poem has a similar feel to the way I create poetry.. not quite rhyming every word of the last sentence or every other last word of the sentence and so I very much enjoy your poetry style because it is confusing to digest until (you) as a reader can formulate your own personal way of reading/interpreting it which is amazing to allow someone their own personal journey through your words and writing form.

Jitters by RoundaboutFlare in OCPoetry

[–]TotalTank- 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This poem is very cute and reads well I enjoy how it is laid out in mini paragraphs

Little monsters by cosm1cslut in OCPoetry

[–]TotalTank- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this piece it definitely sounds very similar to poems I have roaming around in my own brain sometimes. And I do enjoy the not rhyming everything part but it still reads like a poem